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[sid] => 63526
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
[time] => 2004-09-12 21:10:15
[hometext] => 2 my dearest treasured friend on this site 4 u tb he lost another luved one.
[bodytext] =>
SultryRose's Signatures
There u was hurting
needing a friend 2
hold u up in prayer
my own mind
roaming here-n-there
4 give me please?
got lost in space
way beyond dreaming
silence made me wonder
4 give me pelase?
on my knees
You've lost luved one
and need support
we feel pain
when they're fine
greiving hurts
a long time
My insensitivity scattered
every where
my sexy friend
I truly do care
Reach in your soul
I'm there.
[comments] => 18
[counter] => 209
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 30
[ratings] => 6
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:16:45 PM AEST
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Caring and heartfelt write....
There is not an insensitive bone in your body, Em......
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:18:43 PM AEST
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Emy, I am so sorry for your friend's loss. Yes, sometimes we just too self involved. You didn't do it on purpose, I know. He knows too.
Smiles,
Rita |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by AspenGlow on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:18:50 PM AEST
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| That is a sweet write, thanks for sharing. |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 11:14:30 PM AEST
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| just beautiful. it sent chills through me |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:23:50 AM AEST
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Hey mom...
This is very caring and heartfelt... I'm sure ur friend will forgive u... we all do that sometimes... get too absorned in our lives and forget others... it's understandable...
Take care love ya much
Huggs....
Yo daughter...
~Donna~ |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 02:27:07 AM AEST
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Very touching write... May your friend and you find comfort...
Hugs, Hur |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 12:59:25 PM AEST
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This is an example of the huge heart and deep sensitivity that you possess emy.
Your poem touched my heart and deeply.
I am sorry to hear of your friend's loss but your apology was so honest and sincere.
This is a poem I truly enjoyed reading.
I also thought the music was lovely.
Kie |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 01:05:54 PM AEST
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beautiful, emy girl, the part i found most moving are those last few lines, ...heart touching heart, soul to soul, he knows your there:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:39:11 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful, thank you for posting |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Pyrofungus on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:40:36 PM AEST
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aww thats so nice of you to write that poem...great pictures too....
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:04:11 PM AEST
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I thank you for you being you...you are the sweetest and most wonderful being I have ever encountered and I thank you for your kind words and thoughts.......
TONY BENNETT
AKA THE SECRETWIND.............. |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:10:05 AM AEST
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you must have penned hundreds of beautiful writes by now emy, this is another fine example of your high standard of writing.
wildejohnny |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:17:44 AM AEST
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Oh Emy this is the sweetest thing you could possibly do. I'm so sorry for your friend's loss, but I know whomever he or she is will certainly understand. You have a marvelous way with word Emy, and it shows more and more in your poems!
Please send a hugs for me too
Love
ConSuemom |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:32:45 AM AEST
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Emystar - I hope this is only a beautiful poem and you have not really lost anybody.
I am familiar with loss, - there is no insensitivity anywhere.
Very touching poem from a loving heart.
Hugs and love
Elizabeth |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Rose on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:31:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful write Emy. IM sorry for your loss. I hope your friend reads this and will understand. YOu are always there for many folks, including me. We do at times get involved in things, sometimes without meaning to, we leave out some important details of someone. Im sure your friend will know and understand, as I do. You're truely a gifted soul with a compassionate heart.
Amber Rose Yeager :) |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:35:00 PM AEST
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| I am sorry for your friendn's loss. Sad and touching. Great write. |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 9th October 2004 @ 06:40:44 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem. There is a depth here sort of like a wife supporting a husband during tough times. I like the personal nature in which you have written this. |
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Re: 4 GIVE ME, PLEASE?
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 09:56:53 PM AEST
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| Emy, this is such a sad write. Your friend will forgive you. I'm sure. *S* Cynthia |
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