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Array ( [sid] => 63505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => lovely suicide [time] => 2004-09-12 18:33:25 [hometext] => read it. its worth ur time [bodytext] => time by time u saw her walk alone- with no one walkin by her side..
time by time u saw her crying...those golden tears fallin down her tears- she cried alone
time by t ime u saw her cut her skin...didnt say anything- left her alone in her loon to cry.
time by time she asked for ur help all u did was look and tell her to ***** off...
now she sits rocking her self to her own hell...stop u ask her...she looks at u n tells you to ***** off...
the grl u once saw walking by herself is no longer sane...all those tears she couldnt tame
it was all a game to hard for her to tame...
now she lays on the floor....blood covering her shirt...a note sayin her "reasons" ...u pick it up n notice u could of saved this grl.
late at night she haunts u....u wake up n see ur self that time by time u see urself walk alone...
time by time u see urself cryin
before u know it u see urself carving n bleeding for forgiveness...
little did u know ud be the girl, the grl layin on the floor covered with blood with a note saying YOUR
REASONS.....
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 36 [informant] => oneteartofellpain [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
lovely suicide

Contributed by oneteartofellpain on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:33:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



time by time u saw her walk alone- with no one walkin by her side..
time by time u saw her crying...those golden tears fallin down her tears- she cried alone
time by t ime u saw her cut her skin...didnt say anything- left her alone in her loon to cry.
time by time she asked for ur help all u did was look and tell her to ***** off...
now she sits rocking her self to her own hell...stop u ask her...she looks at u n tells you to ***** off...
the grl u once saw walking by herself is no longer sane...all those tears she couldnt tame
it was all a game to hard for her to tame...
now she lays on the floor....blood covering her shirt...a note sayin her "reasons" ...u pick it up n notice u could of saved this grl.
late at night she haunts u....u wake up n see ur self that time by time u see urself walk alone...
time by time u see urself cryin
before u know it u see urself carving n bleeding for forgiveness...
little did u know ud be the girl, the grl layin on the floor covered with blood with a note saying YOUR
REASONS.....




Copyright © oneteartofellpain ... [ 2004-09-12 18:33:25]
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Re: lovely suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:50:32 PM AEST
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you're right its a beautiful poem, but dont get too cocky about your writing, it doesnt flatter you. in any case, great write!
~Brynna aka Magenta~


Re: lovely suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 01:33:09 PM AEST
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so sorry it took me so long to get my comment on here. great poem... although very sad... keep writing babe.
~Deanna


Re: lovely suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by immortal_pain on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:58:46 PM AEST
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blackplaid is right. dont gt too cocky but it is a very very nce write




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