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I thought this was something new
Why cant you see
I thought i could trust you
I thought it was safe
I had no doubt
It was all a waste
I put my heart out

Feels like i'm drowning
This is not what i had in mind
Keep reaching but not grasping
Thought it would be different this time
I let it happen again
Why did i open myself to this pain
I feel it under my skin
It drives me insane

Feels like a smack in the face
What did i do to receive this
Blood is all i taste
I remember the first kiss
I remember that glow in your eye
Am i to blame
Now were at goodbye
Why does it allways end the same
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Bad Love

Contributed by sober_punk_2 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 02:45:28 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Feels like somethings taken from me
I thought this was something new
Why cant you see
I thought i could trust you
I thought it was safe
I had no doubt
It was all a waste
I put my heart out

Feels like i'm drowning
This is not what i had in mind
Keep reaching but not grasping
Thought it would be different this time
I let it happen again
Why did i open myself to this pain
I feel it under my skin
It drives me insane

Feels like a smack in the face
What did i do to receive this
Blood is all i taste
I remember the first kiss
I remember that glow in your eye
Am i to blame
Now were at goodbye
Why does it allways end the same

Copyright © sober_punk_2 ... [ 2004-09-12 14:45:28]
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Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 04:41:39 PM AEST
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this wasnt what i expected at all a truely lovely piece of writing - very nice work indeed

Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 05:53:05 PM AEST
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aww*whipes tear away* this is sucha sad poem*sniffles* wonderfully written though, great job!

Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lanna047 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 09:23:18 PM AEST
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I feel exactly the same way ... great job at putting those feelings into words. Raw and emotional. Hope things get better for you.

Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 01:19:22 AM AEST
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I like the content and the poem as a whole..I saw some spelling errors or typos..no biggie..unless it's going to an editor..lol. They don't correct it for you, they shoot it back to you. One or two errors and they don't even read on.. I'm really bad, Naz helps me out. But the thoughts were great.

Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:48:46 AM AEST
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Straight from the core of a broken heart. Honest emotion always touches the reader as it has touched me. Hopefully one day the ending will be much different. June

Re: Bad Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Punkrocknemo on Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 11:50:50 AM AEST
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This is a very good poem i like it alot. I get where your coming from sometimes theres just something about a guy that we cant seem to leave him even if he does hit us and abuse us. good writing.

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