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Array ( [sid] => 63378 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => was i wrong for what i did [time] => 2004-09-11 14:40:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => last night
was that real did it happen
was I just thinking it cause it felt so good
was it in my head or was it happening
did you feel it to so sort and sweet
did you think it was all a dream
but it was true I know now
it was more then before it meant more
we didn’t really think but I think that helped
we just did it now I’m scared
scared that you wont want to see me
scared that its going to make you stay away
I am so lost was it the right thing to do
I hope its what you wanted
it felt so right so why am I scared. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 169 [topic] => 22 [informant] => tears_of_blood [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

was i wrong for what i did

Contributed by tears_of_blood on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:40:48 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

last night
was that real did it happen
was I just thinking it cause it felt so good
was it in my head or was it happening
did you feel it to so sort and sweet
did you think it was all a dream
but it was true I know now
it was more then before it meant more
we didn’t really think but I think that helped
we just did it now I’m scared
scared that you wont want to see me
scared that its going to make you stay away
I am so lost was it the right thing to do
I hope its what you wanted
it felt so right so why am I scared.

Copyright Â© tears_of_blood ... [ 2004-09-11 14:40:48]
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Re: was i wrong for what i did (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 06:07:11 PM AEST
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who knows what's wrong or right anymore. i hate worrying about what we're doing may be wrong...isn't it about us? i just hope that you don't throw it all away again...cuz then it will be wrong....

Re: was i wrong for what i did (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 12:39:24 AM AEST
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great poem brad....... i loved it

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