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Array ( [sid] => 63375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => This Opened Door [time] => 2004-09-11 14:02:34 [hometext] => This ones kinda confusing until the end, if u can try and guess what im talking about before its done lol, and a note to all readers, i reely shudda mentioned it in my wouldent have had sex poem lol, i am a virgin so no its not a poem about me personally! [bodytext] => The simplicity of it all, the weakness that I find,
Watching it slowly fall, leaving me completely blind,
Unknown to your eyes, foreign to your capacity,
In the darkness lurks spies, searching for animosity,
Understood by very few, mislead by a great deal,
If you only knew, if it's fake or real,
The answers always hidden, not to be revealed,
But sometimes the secrets given, the lock now un-sealed,
And if you open that door, there is no going back,
A life where there's no more, impossibly on the right track,
Blackness shall surround you, nothing will you hear,
Something horrifying but true, not able to shed a tear,
Finding out life was worthless, no more inhaled breath,
Could have been more careless, this opened door is death.
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This Opened Door

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:02:34 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The simplicity of it all, the weakness that I find,
Watching it slowly fall, leaving me completely blind,
Unknown to your eyes, foreign to your capacity,
In the darkness lurks spies, searching for animosity,
Understood by very few, mislead by a great deal,
If you only knew, if it's fake or real,
The answers always hidden, not to be revealed,
But sometimes the secrets given, the lock now un-sealed,
And if you open that door, there is no going back,
A life where there's no more, impossibly on the right track,
Blackness shall surround you, nothing will you hear,
Something horrifying but true, not able to shed a tear,
Finding out life was worthless, no more inhaled breath,
Could have been more careless, this opened door is death.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-11 14:02:34]
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Re: This Opened Door (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 10th November 2014 @ 01:58:41 AM AEST
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Great ending line, very well written.

Understood by very few, mislead by a great deal,
If you only knew, if it's fake or real,

I really liked these two lines also

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