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Array ( [sid] => 6336 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Internal Combustion [time] => 2002-11-07 11:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I look into the mirror
I see a face I dont much care for
She's a liar, a ***** and a whore
Look into her eyes, she has no soul
The devil now has full control
I smash my fist into her face
Watch her fall with such disgrace
I broke her nose, her skull is bleeding
Just laugh at her in her time of needing
I stab a knife into her chest-
But dont smile now-
She's not dead yet
I smile as I turn the knife
Relieving all my pain and strife
Sighing proudly I look away
I'll never have to look at her again
Not even one more day.
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Internal Combustion

Contributed by Nyx on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I look into the mirror
I see a face I dont much care for
She's a liar, a ***** and a whore
Look into her eyes, she has no soul
The devil now has full control
I smash my fist into her face
Watch her fall with such disgrace
I broke her nose, her skull is bleeding
Just laugh at her in her time of needing
I stab a knife into her chest-
But dont smile now-
She's not dead yet
I smile as I turn the knife
Relieving all my pain and strife
Sighing proudly I look away
I'll never have to look at her again
Not even one more day.

Copyright Â© Nyx ... [ 2002-11-07 11:30:00]
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Re: Internal Combustion (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:21:31 PM AEST
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you really need to pull yourself up by the boot straps girl and find some interest in life there is a whole world out there waiting for you to explore... i hope this poem is just you expressing your anger at life or at something that has recently happened to you.
peace, love and happy poetry

Re: Internal Combustion (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 01:24:00 PM AEST
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I hope this isn't how you feel
but if it is, i can relate to feeling
this way. I'd like to read more
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Internal Combustion (User Rating: 1 )
by pickles99 on Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:22:47 PM AEST
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This is a good poem. Even if this is how you really feel, I hope getting this down and out is a way to help you. This poem is very good in context but I hope thats all it is....is just words.

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