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Array ( [sid] => 63318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Favorite Demon [time] => 2004-09-10 23:39:30 [hometext] => wrote this shortly after i arrived where i live currently.. [bodytext] => The demon
He haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Leaves me bleeding on my knees
Always scheming
Plotting away my demise
My favorite demon
Doesn't listen to my cries

Feelings weaken
My body growing numb
I hear him speaking
My child look at what you've done
But how I love him
When he haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Always brings me to my knees [comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 32 [informant] => CrimsonOrgazm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
My Favorite Demon

Contributed by CrimsonOrgazm on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:39:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



The demon
He haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Leaves me bleeding on my knees
Always scheming
Plotting away my demise
My favorite demon
Doesn't listen to my cries

Feelings weaken
My body growing numb
I hear him speaking
My child look at what you've done
But how I love him
When he haunts me in my dreams
My favorite demon
Always brings me to my knees



Copyright © CrimsonOrgazm ... [ 2004-09-10 23:39:30]
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Re: My Favorite Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:41:16 PM AEST
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powerful write.


Re: My Favorite Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:45:04 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, very vivid, emotions a plenty a well worth read.


Re: My Favorite Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 03:18:57 AM AEST
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haunting


Re: My Favorite Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by Firestarter1038 on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:54:04 AM AEST
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Wow Great Poem! Its so dark, and the persona in the poem seems to love this 'demon' even though he just hurts her/him. Sounds like many of my Friends relationships, Though the meaning of the poem could be different , a bad relationship is what comes to my mind. Once again, great write!


Re: My Favorite Demon (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 02:07:37 PM AEST
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Marvellous as always, very erie and haunting, I know what ur talking about, my back cabins haunted and I reside in it for the summer evenings lol Anyways great job!




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