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Array ( [sid] => 63310 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silence [time] => 2004-09-10 22:31:48 [hometext] => This isn't my personal view on death, but more like a persona. It represents the fear that everyone shares, the fear of no life after this one. [bodytext] => Silence

All I hear is silence,
Not a movement, not a sound,
All I hear I silence,
I'm afraid, Its all around,

All I see is darkness,
I cannot see a thing,
All there is is darkness,
Thats all my life can bring,

All I feel is fear,
Like a blanket wrapped to tight,
All I feel is the fear,
That i'll never find the light,

All I want is out,
An exit sign glowing red,
all I want is out,
How I wish I wan't dead. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Firestarter1038 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Silence

Contributed by Firestarter1038 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:31:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Silence

All I hear is silence,
Not a movement, not a sound,
All I hear I silence,
I'm afraid, Its all around,

All I see is darkness,
I cannot see a thing,
All there is is darkness,
Thats all my life can bring,

All I feel is fear,
Like a blanket wrapped to tight,
All I feel is the fear,
That i'll never find the light,

All I want is out,
An exit sign glowing red,
all I want is out,
How I wish I wan't dead.

Copyright © Firestarter1038 ... [ 2004-09-10 22:31:48]
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Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:42:47 PM AEST
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Beautfully composed, sounded like a song, a sad one, but an awsome write.
Thank you for sharing such a wonderous talent

~silence~

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:49:11 PM AEST
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Fascinating suject!!! Well presented... beautifully written...
What an awesome concept of death! Thank u for sharing...
~Donna~

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:51:30 PM AEST
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awesome write man! very well done, its short and sweet, good job. you might wanna check out my poem, AFRAID OF THE DARK. you can get it from my profile, thanks!!! keep up the good writing.
~lovelovelove~Brynna aka magenta

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:22:42 PM AEST
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very nice. i used to believe there was no afterlife either. but when i thought that you died, i thought you died. there was no thoughts and no feelings. you were basically a rock when dead. but things change.

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 12:00:28 AM AEST
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That is a true mystery to what we all think what an after life is.Some believe theres a hell and some don't .
some believes theres a heaven we all go .
good write.

Re: Silence (User Rating: 1 )
by toxicchubakka on Tuesday, 11th October 2011 @ 09:00:44 AM AEST
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i know its metaphoric but i dont think a dead person could be afraid

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