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I never understood the world around me
I never saw a reason to live...
But then you appeared in my world
And things started to get better
I saw things from a different angle
But most importantly I saw a new reason to live.

Until you came along, I was torn apart inside
My life was meaningless
Nothing mattered…
But then you provided me with a new life
You gathered up my pieces and helped me recover
You gave me something to strive for.

I never expected to care about anything again,
I never cared so much about someone,
I never anticipated such an amazing connection,
And I never said the words “I love you”
and felt it so deeply
Until you came along…
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 259 [topic] => 2 [informant] => holderofthestone [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Until you came along

Contributed by holderofthestone on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Until you came along, I never saw hope
I never understood the world around me
I never saw a reason to live...
But then you appeared in my world
And things started to get better
I saw things from a different angle
But most importantly I saw a new reason to live.

Until you came along, I was torn apart inside
My life was meaningless
Nothing mattered…
But then you provided me with a new life
You gathered up my pieces and helped me recover
You gave me something to strive for.

I never expected to care about anything again,
I never cared so much about someone,
I never anticipated such an amazing connection,
And I never said the words “I love you”
and felt it so deeply
Until you came along…




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Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:16:08 PM AEST
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Wow, holder! This is different for you... in terms of style. I really like it! It seems like it just.... flowed out of you. It really is lovely!

I'm so glad I saw this when it landed on the home page... I would not have wanted to miss then one.

Beautifully done!
SNM


Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:52:14 PM AEST
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WOW!!! What an awesome poem... beautiful...
almost made me want to cry...
Beautiful thoughts and feelings throughout... I can't say enuff about it... astounding comes to mind... wonderful style..
Thank u for sharing...
~Donna~


Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:57:22 PM AEST
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Excellent write!! A masterpice if you ask me...
Jenni


Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 03:26:43 PM AEST
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wow wow wow I liked this a lot please holder keep it up...

much love,
Dani

a very sweet write...


Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:40:33 PM AEST
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I feel the same


Re: Until you came along (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:43:12 PM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel




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