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No Dreams Left
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:44:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I have no dreams left,
Away from them I have been swept,
Far, far down the river,
Happiness is such an Indian giver.
Used to think I could do anything,
My now winter was once my spring,
As I float helplessly down stream,
No-one hears my curdled scream.
Everything now seems so hollow,
I have no lead that I can follow,
Empty & deceived lays my heart,
For many years it’s been torn apart.
All I have now are nightmares,
That look at me with hate filled glares,
They love to taunt & tease,
Laughing as I drop to my knees.
My dreams have all been chased away,
By horrors that aren’t kept at bay,
I feel as they flee my body & mind,
Hiding from me so I can not find.
I beg my dreams to come right back,
But they have ran way of my track,
Out of sight never to be found,
Whilst I am left weeping on the ground.
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pixie
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Re: No Dreams Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by emospaztic on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:00:23 PM AEST (User
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Laughing as I drop to my knees.
That's my favorite line. Nice job. I love it. One thing you could add, is maybe change the punctuation. You don't need a comma after every line, but there are some places within a line where you could add one. Just a suggestion. Great job anyway!
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Re: No Dreams Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by AspenGlow on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:43:06 PM AEST (User
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Beautiful poem. Dreams are wishes and wishes are prayers, and prayers are made whole by those who believe in their soul.....there is a sunrise just for me.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: No Dreams Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 04:12:00 AM AEST (User
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what a magnificent poem..though very sad and heart breaking..:-) venkat |
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Re: No Dreams Left
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 07:00:18 AM AEST (User
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Very sad. I have been there though. Awesome poem. |
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