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Array ( [sid] => 63248 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Time freezes [time] => 2004-09-10 10:33:16 [hometext] => Just thinking out loud [bodytext] => Red light, yellow light, green light go
watch all those go too, and fro

Wouldnt it, be cool if one could make time like that
You could sit and talk, freeze it, then come back
make for time you missed, and time you began
To pick up the conversation, and no thought lost
To laugh and laugh, and get out the most
To be able to see things, and antalize,
And begin, what you left off with out surprise
Never lose the true meaning of the context

But as we know.........life and convos all have to flow the way life goes
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Time freezes

Contributed by brew on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:33:16 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Red light, yellow light, green light go
watch all those go too, and fro

Wouldnt it, be cool if one could make time like that
You could sit and talk, freeze it, then come back
make for time you missed, and time you began
To pick up the conversation, and no thought lost
To laugh and laugh, and get out the most
To be able to see things, and antalize,
And begin, what you left off with out surprise
Never lose the true meaning of the context

But as we know.........life and convos all have to flow the way life goes




Copyright © brew ... [ 2004-09-10 10:33:16]
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Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by markie on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:21:04 PM AEST
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Great poem. It would be cool also if we could have a delete button and take back things we say...good write!!!


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:53:02 PM AEST
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so true so true.
good write.


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 01:58:35 PM AEST
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you really hit the nail on the head good write.

wildejohnny.


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 03:13:43 PM AEST
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Great write.....wouldn't it reallybe good.......
Jenni


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:57:40 PM AEST
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I loved everything about this poem
the idea the style eveything...
and yes it would be handy expecially when you make a mistake or when you enjoy something in life that much that you don't want that moment to excape!
cheers!


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:23:21 PM AEST
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Choices are made, red means stop, green means go, yellow means caution. Such lights we are all equipted, and as in traffic sometimes we do not heed, when green should be red and red not green....and yellow is caution and thrown to the wind.

Excellent poem as are all, thank you so very much for sharing.


Re: Time freezes (User Rating: 1 )
by nikkkkki on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 06:19:24 PM AEST
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i've thought about this so many times! thx for putting it out as it is, i wish it could be true...




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