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[sid] => 63243
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Unclean
[time] => 2004-09-10 08:43:24
[hometext] => raped...
[bodytext] => he covered my mouth and I couldn't scream
I remember I couldn't get his sent off me
the sounds around me piercing my ears
I felt unclean
I started to cry
didin't know any better
will I ever understand
it was me all along
it was all my fault
he held me down, unable to move
no one around to save me
I remember I was all alone
he had me trapped
I thought I was dying
I remember the pain
I remember him runing hand down
his fingers reaching deep inside
he told me to shut up as I cried
it seemed like an eternity
he hovered over my body and began to penetrate
I tried so hard to scream
I tried to move
I tried not to cry
the blood was already there form before
but the he told me to shut up and beat me more
when he was done he said I was dead if I opened my mouth
I felt torn up as I sat there
I was so scared
I felt unclean
it kept running through my head
this is all your fault, you dirty whore
how could you let this happen
but I remember his horrible voice
when he covered my mouth
he said...
he said...
SHHHHHHHHHH...
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 158
[topic] => 59
[informant] => screwup
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 5
[ratings] => 1
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => psychoticpoems
)
Unclean
Contributed by
screwup
on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:43:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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he covered my mouth and I couldn't scream
I remember I couldn't get his sent off me
the sounds around me piercing my ears
I felt unclean
I started to cry
didin't know any better
will I ever understand
it was me all along
it was all my fault
he held me down, unable to move
no one around to save me
I remember I was all alone
he had me trapped
I thought I was dying
I remember the pain
I remember him runing hand down
his fingers reaching deep inside
he told me to shut up as I cried
it seemed like an eternity
he hovered over my body and began to penetrate
I tried so hard to scream
I tried to move
I tried not to cry
the blood was already there form before
but the he told me to shut up and beat me more
when he was done he said I was dead if I opened my mouth
I felt torn up as I sat there
I was so scared
I felt unclean
it kept running through my head
this is all your fault, you dirty whore
how could you let this happen
but I remember his horrible voice
when he covered my mouth
he said...
he said...
SHHHHHHHHHH...
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Re: Unclean
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by x_midnight_x on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:49:39 AM AEST
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interesting poem,i hope you dont blame yourself its clear from the way things happend you were a helpless victim,
theres not one stain on you in gods eyes only sympathy and love,
blessings,
may the lights apon your path be green and good to go:)
midnight x |
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Re: Unclean
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:03:14 AM AEST
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Haunting poem! I hope you will find the strength to carry on with your life!
Peace to you!
Hur |
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Re: Unclean
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 10:40:05 AM AEST
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You were the victim, not the abuser. You have no reason for guilt. I hope you can eventually accept this in your mind. You were forcibly raped by a man against your will. He is the one that should have the remorse, not you.
Rita |
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Re: Unclean
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by deathdrop on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 11:17:03 AM AEST
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O.m.g!!!!!!!
PLEASE DON’T THINK THAT IT’S YOUR FAULT, DON’T BLAME YOUR-SELF! You couldn’t stop it!
Please, please, PLEASE! Don’t let him make you believe this!
you're so much better than that! don't let him!
keep on talking to me if it helps!
i'll ALWAYS be here! |
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Re: Unclean
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by markie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:28:17 PM AEST
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| You did what you had to do, to stay alive. We're so happy you're here to write beautiful poetry..and share the pain that's inside..helping others to understand. You aren't unclean, but I understand how you could feel that way..my heart goes out to you..Keep writing and letting the pain out. You're a wonderful, beautiful, clean person and what happened can't change that. You were made by God..how can a human make one of God's creations un clean? I hope the bastard dies for trying though...mary. |
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Re: Unclean
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by poetmarie on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:34:05 PM AEST
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| Very tragic and powerful. I could feel your pain. It's not your fault, you're the victim. |
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Re: Unclean
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by kidpoet_213 on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:47:31 PM AEST
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Deanna...
All these ppl r right... it's not ur fault... it's not u... babe.... that just like Helen... it's not her fault either... wrong place... wrong time! Things happen... look at me... just reading this poem brought back some of the junk I've been thru... but I'm not dwelling on it...
U wrote a strong piece here... and I thank God u're here to write it... how easily things could have turned ugly... that's what I've told Helen too...
U're strong... don't ever forget that... and God will see u through it... keep ur chin up and eyes clear...
Good poem babe... keep writing and get all that junk out that's trapped inside...
love ya...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Unclean
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by xemptydecemberx on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 03:52:02 PM AEST
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hits close to home.. but they're all right, wasnt your fault, never will be.. so take care, and keep your head up and the poems coming
-x |
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