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You seem so real...
And then you fade away.
I try to hold on
But you slip through my fingers
like sand.
As the wind carries you away,
You take my heart with you
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Everytime

Contributed by Jeanetta on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:45:26 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

You are like a ghost in my life.
You seem so real...
And then you fade away.
I try to hold on
But you slip through my fingers
like sand.
As the wind carries you away,
You take my heart with you
Everytime

Copyright © Jeanetta ... [ 2004-09-09 21:45:26]
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Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:50:17 PM AEST
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nice. but sad in a way. i hope you catch him, one day.

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:09:58 PM AEST
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So few words, so much meaning. This was haunting and beautiful!

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:12:09 PM AEST
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simply beautiful

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:20:58 PM AEST
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Short and sweat, in time your lines will meet
And everything will sit like pillows on the sheet.
Keep your head up. time is what', it's about.
God bless.

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:51:08 PM AEST
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Short and beautiful. I loved it!

Chanti

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:56:40 PM AEST
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AAWwwhhh, sad but sweet.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Everytime (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 11:00:13 PM AEST
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I am always struck when a poet manages to stuff a lot of meaning into few words... as you have done here. This is wonderful. Ending with "Everytime" is rather powerful, I think.

Nicely done-
SNM

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