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Array ( [sid] => 63158 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Song one [time] => 2004-09-09 18:23:15 [hometext] => Some Songs I wrote for wingless angles my band [bodytext] => Song One
I want to be the drug that
Flows through your veins
And be what you use
When you want to drown the pain

I want to be inside you
As you are always in me
Don’t push me away
Inject me into your soul

So that I can help you
From your memories, be set free

I want to save you from that blade
You are I are held… in your hand
So that you won’t ever leave me again
You are the only one on who I can depend
I am an angel will you be my wings

Together we can tear apart everything
I don’t want to be left alone
Promise you will be with stay with me
Till we find a place to call home
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Doriens_Picture [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Song one

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:23:15 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Song One
I want to be the drug that
Flows through your veins
And be what you use
When you want to drown the pain

I want to be inside you
As you are always in me
Don’t push me away
Inject me into your soul

So that I can help you
From your memories, be set free

I want to save you from that blade
You are I are held… in your hand
So that you won’t ever leave me again
You are the only one on who I can depend
I am an angel will you be my wings

Together we can tear apart everything
I don’t want to be left alone
Promise you will be with stay with me
Till we find a place to call home

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-09-09 18:23:15]
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Re: Song one (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:29:42 PM AEST
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=]] powerful and emotional (like you said). well if you are writing the songs for the band, than your band is sure to be fantastic, at least in the lyrics part of it. this kind of reminds me of cold by crossfade.

the only thing i dont really like about this piece, is your title "Song one" pet peeves about untitles etc, dont ask me why. keep up the excellent work as always.

Re: Song one (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:36:43 PM AEST
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This is really lovely......I enjoyed it immensely...
Jenni

Re: Song one (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 07:54:35 AM AEST
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wow I really liked this, very dark and full of emotion, powerful write.

pixie xx

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