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Array ( [sid] => 63141 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Expectations [time] => 2004-09-09 15:28:39 [hometext] => Just finished this poem aswell, it is very anti-male and I am sorry if it offends any males who happen 2 read it but if you've been in my shoes u mite undrestand a bit better, appologies to all, but its how I feel. [bodytext] => You don't want me, You can't have me,
Won't fully love me, Won't understand me,
You will break me, You'll begin to hate me,
Won't speak truth to me, Won't avoid to fail me,

That's the way it is and will always be,
Cuz baby Im sorry but your not for me,
You're just like poison to my subtle lips,
We'd only be watching our love as it slips,

He'll just use me, He'll want to hurt me,
Refuses to save me, Refuses to cherish me,
He'll only harm me, He'll just abuse me,
Refuses to care for me, Refuses all to do with me,

Like the devil's curse, det upon my soul,
Our relationship growing more and more cold,
You can look at me but don't ever touch,
I've had enough abuse, in fact to much

They wan't to kill me, They'll crucify me,
Lack to dream of me, Lack to justify me,
They will cheat me, They'll lie to me,
Lack to support me, Lack to cry for me,

Life just isn't that simple when you're me,
It takes a really special guy to see,
What I need for it to work out,
But they won't listen, so I will shout,

It will betray me, It wants to damage me,
Hide light from me, Hide secrets from me,
It loves to mistreat me, It enjoys beating me,
Hides right from me, hides life from me,

Are you getting the picture my friend?
This battle of mine may not come to an end,
As days pass by, my hope starts to fade away,
Never to be seen again on a later day,

To penetrate me, To simplify me,
Enjoy to torture me, Enjoy taking from me,
To defy me, To dispise of me,
Enjoy trying me, Enjoy mutilating me,

As your chances slip away, if you care,
Take a step up and I'll meet you there,
We'll see how much of a gentleman you can be,
If you don't impress, you'll have no chance with me.

Love fooling me, Love misleading me,
Fail to promise me, Fail to kiss me,
Love to intimidate me, Love to complicate me,
Fail to hug me, Fail to shelter me,

And I don't care if you pass me by,
I am one of the best so go ahead and try,
I can be all you ever dream pf and all you need,
If you get a taste of me, you'll be full of lust and greed.


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Expectations

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You don't want me, You can't have me,
Won't fully love me, Won't understand me,
You will break me, You'll begin to hate me,
Won't speak truth to me, Won't avoid to fail me,

That's the way it is and will always be,
Cuz baby Im sorry but your not for me,
You're just like poison to my subtle lips,
We'd only be watching our love as it slips,

He'll just use me, He'll want to hurt me,
Refuses to save me, Refuses to cherish me,
He'll only harm me, He'll just abuse me,
Refuses to care for me, Refuses all to do with me,

Like the devil's curse, det upon my soul,
Our relationship growing more and more cold,
You can look at me but don't ever touch,
I've had enough abuse, in fact to much

They wan't to kill me, They'll crucify me,
Lack to dream of me, Lack to justify me,
They will cheat me, They'll lie to me,
Lack to support me, Lack to cry for me,

Life just isn't that simple when you're me,
It takes a really special guy to see,
What I need for it to work out,
But they won't listen, so I will shout,

It will betray me, It wants to damage me,
Hide light from me, Hide secrets from me,
It loves to mistreat me, It enjoys beating me,
Hides right from me, hides life from me,

Are you getting the picture my friend?
This battle of mine may not come to an end,
As days pass by, my hope starts to fade away,
Never to be seen again on a later day,

To penetrate me, To simplify me,
Enjoy to torture me, Enjoy taking from me,
To defy me, To dispise of me,
Enjoy trying me, Enjoy mutilating me,

As your chances slip away, if you care,
Take a step up and I'll meet you there,
We'll see how much of a gentleman you can be,
If you don't impress, you'll have no chance with me.

Love fooling me, Love misleading me,
Fail to promise me, Fail to kiss me,
Love to intimidate me, Love to complicate me,
Fail to hug me, Fail to shelter me,

And I don't care if you pass me by,
I am one of the best so go ahead and try,
I can be all you ever dream pf and all you need,
If you get a taste of me, you'll be full of lust and greed.






Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-09 15:28:39]
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Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:39:23 PM AEST
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Having never walked in woman's shoes, I'd say i couldn't fully relate to this, but the depth of feeling is evident, along with a sponful of vitriol on occassion.

Very potent. Keep writing.


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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bad men bad bad men!!!
Sorry got carried away this is a great poem full of fire and can be related to by many of us. Great write
Michelle


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by luna_mica on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:02:09 PM AEST
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i must agree with neptunes_first. i cant fully relate to this poem, but i do realize youve got talent. very emotional. i like it.


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:18:25 PM AEST
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Well, they aren't all bad but there are some that are even worse. Emotional piece.

Rita


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:23:23 PM AEST
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great write.


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:24:31 PM AEST
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Good poem. I think all woman feel like this at some point in their life. This poem describes how I feel at least. I've been with all the wrong guys.....( except two.) But the right man will find you someday. Don't search for the right one....he'll come find you when you least expect it. Peace and Love to you. Strength to all woman and "kick some butt" if it's needed.lol
ALINA


Re: Expectations (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:17:28 PM AEST
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hey i can fully relate. you know that you could give the world to the most deserving person...but i guess not all ppl want the world hey? and the future just looks bleaker when you're more and more disappointed. but keep your head up as this poem seems to say...it's so much better to realize that you can offer the RIGHT guy so much so don't give everything to the WRONG one...lots of love Anastasia




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