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As The Planets Dance
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:55:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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As the planets dance,
I sit & watch them in a trance,
Jupiter, Pluto, Saturn & Mars,
Dance a waltz with the stars.
Swirling round & round,
Never stopping to grace the ground,
Venus, Uranus & Earth,
Were all present at our births.
I’d love to hold one in my hand,
Or witness one as it set to land,
Maybe I could catch Neptune,
Or sit & talk with the moon.
Oh the beauty of the universe,
As all the world’s planets coerce,
They spin & turn with the world,
Wonders & amazement unfurl.
Out of the reach of our eyes,
The planets celebrate in the night sky,
Swirling, dancing, moving in space,
I watch them as they set their own pace.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-09 12:55:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by RhythmBndt on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 01:01:29 PM AEST (User
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Very pretty :) |
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 01:04:14 PM AEST (User
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i love all your poems and i love this happy one. really lovely. |
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:05:24 PM AEST (User
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I wrote something similar, entitled 'Stellar Waltz'. A little less concise than this one, but I think it covered the same kind of theme.
I like this, pixie. Well worth reading again.
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:00:29 PM AEST (User
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Very nice. :P |
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST (User
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Very nice. :P |
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by secretwind on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:42:46 PM AEST (User
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Sweet universal flow...... |
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Re: As The Planets Dance
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 06:28:21 PM AEST (User
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i really love this one, im a sky watcher too, lol, truely though, you've penned sparkling beauty here:) hugs n' love nessa
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