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Array ( [sid] => 63087 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide's Whore [time] => 2004-09-09 06:41:48 [hometext] => I've attempted suicide more times than I can count... and this is what it resolves to. PLEASE READ_AND COMMENT [bodytext] => attempted death so many times
suicide in so many rymes
all I think about anymore
I swear I've got to be suicide's whore
rope around my neck,
inside I am a reck
gun to my head
fear in my eyes
I want to die
slit my throat
I want to hide
get away from those who betray me
someday maybe they'll see
I need love in my life
but instead I have a knife
suicide's whore is at it again
letting the blade sink within [comments] => 8 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 36 [informant] => screwup [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 17 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide's Whore

Contributed by screwup on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:41:48 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

attempted death so many times
suicide in so many rymes
all I think about anymore
I swear I've got to be suicide's whore
rope around my neck,
inside I am a reck
gun to my head
fear in my eyes
I want to die
slit my throat
I want to hide
get away from those who betray me
someday maybe they'll see
I need love in my life
but instead I have a knife
suicide's whore is at it again
letting the blade sink within

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-09-09 06:41:48]
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Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:00:55 AM AEST
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Nice work the cold despair is clostrophobic, lov wont redeem you tho mate and if you expect that it will only make life worse

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 07:35:14 AM AEST
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*hugs* I am so sorry that you feel this way, you don't have to be suicides whore, I know you are stronger than that, you are writing about it, thats a start isn't it? *hugs*

a very pained and raw write,

takecare
pixie xx

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:04:58 AM AEST
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This is clear, descriptive, and full. Sounds like it isn't the answer for you.
Stitch

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:25:44 AM AEST
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I like this.
I think you are strong enough to survive, and like Pixie said, you are writing about it so that's a start.
This is a good poem. The only think i would suggest is, maybe some capital letters. I
also love how it seems to 'speed up' in the middle.
Great write,
Phil xxx

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by emphaticplacebo on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:59:00 AM AEST
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Great write. Very confronting and raw with your personal emotions. I quite enjoyed reading it and can relate to what youre saying. Good work!

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 09:52:37 AM AEST
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Hey Babe...
This is a very raw... pained emotional write...
but take it it easy on urself... like the other's have said ur strong... ur writing about it... that's a start... keep it up... PM okay...
Love ya...
~Donna~

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 10:16:08 AM AEST
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Powerful and disturbing! Brave of you to open yourself up and give us a glimpse inside. Very moving write!

Laurie

Re: Suicide's Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:22:30 PM AEST
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right out there ...you layed it on the line......great write......

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