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Array ( [sid] => 63085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love [time] => 2004-09-09 03:02:42 [hometext] => Hi, I've been on holiday and I'm glad to be back again... Hur [bodytext] => (Version 1)

You are like
Bryce Dallas Howard on screen
And Barry White in dolby surround

I drown as I dive in the sinks of your eyes and
Burn as I let your dark voice engulf me

But your looks are not meant for me
And in your embrace I don't feel your heart

*

(Version 2)

You are like
Bryce Dallas Howard on Hollywood screen
And great Barry White on a discotheque scene

I drown as I dive in the blue of your eyes
I burn each time your dark voice buries my cries

But none of these sweet looks are meant just for me
And your warm embrace breaths no sincerity

* [comments] => 7 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 33 [informant] => Hurretje [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love

Contributed by Hurretje on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:02:42 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

(Version 1)

You are like
Bryce Dallas Howard on screen
And Barry White in dolby surround

I drown as I dive in the sinks of your eyes and
Burn as I let your dark voice engulf me

But your looks are not meant for me
And in your embrace I don't feel your heart

*

(Version 2)

You are like
Bryce Dallas Howard on Hollywood screen
And great Barry White on a discotheque scene

I drown as I dive in the blue of your eyes
I burn each time your dark voice buries my cries

But none of these sweet looks are meant just for me
And your warm embrace breaths no sincerity

*

Copyright © Hurretje ... [ 2004-09-09 03:02:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 03:06:19 AM AEST
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Welcome back, Hur - t's been a while.

I appreciate the variation in this theme - its subtle and well-worded, although I'm unaware of whom Bryce Dallace Howard is . . . but anyway - I like this line;

"And in your embrace I don't feel your heart "

Its well-written. I find darkness and depth within the words.
Keep writing.

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:35:03 AM AEST
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welcome back Hur :)

great write,

pixie xx

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:18:59 AM AEST
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welcome back! i wll be honest i don't know who Bruce Dallas Howard is but this is very well written as usual.

wildejohnny.

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:14:24 AM AEST
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Well, I don't know who Bryce is either, lol. This is an emotional piece. It is about time you got back. I have missed you.

Rita

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:28:21 AM AEST
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I am captivated by version two..
wonderfully done.
welcome my dear friend.:-) venkat

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:32:53 AM AEST
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Glad you're back Hur.
I was wondering where you had dissapeared to. lol
I adore the second version also. And i also don't know who Bryce Dallas Howard is either. (Sorry. lol)

"I drown as I dive in the blue of your eyes
I burn each time your dark voice buries my cries"
That is my favourite part.
Great write,
Welcome back,
Phil xxx

Re: Silent Reproach to an Unattainable Love (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 08:55:47 AM AEST
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:) glad to have you back.
this was very interesting. i really liked how it was written. and the bit of darkness mixxed in.
really awesome poem. i liked it. great job. keep it up. 5 stars
Arden

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