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Array ( [sid] => 63078 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Ever Give Up [time] => 2004-09-08 23:28:46 [hometext] => To The Fine Poets Here Who Are Down And Out, You Know Who You Are, My Friends [bodytext] => Don't Ever Give Up

Don't be down and out
life is truly worth living
When things Don't go right for you
never stop your giving

You will see in the end
and one day, get in return
All the things you hoped for
and the true love that you yearn

It is not always easy
to put up with the worst
Nothing getting better
you think that you are cursed

Have faith that things will change
and someday very soon
The sun will be getting brighter
the stars and the full moon

When you are a giving person
and know that you are doing right
Love will one day find you
without the slightest fight

Be prepared my friend
this day will soon arrive
Together with your true love
your lives will surely thrive [comments] => 7 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Don't Ever Give Up

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:28:46 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Don't Ever Give Up

Don't be down and out
life is truly worth living
When things Don't go right for you
never stop your giving

You will see in the end
and one day, get in return
All the things you hoped for
and the true love that you yearn

It is not always easy
to put up with the worst
Nothing getting better
you think that you are cursed

Have faith that things will change
and someday very soon
The sun will be getting brighter
the stars and the full moon

When you are a giving person
and know that you are doing right
Love will one day find you
without the slightest fight

Be prepared my friend
this day will soon arrive
Together with your true love
your lives will surely thrive




Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-09-08 23:28:46]
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Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:46:41 AM AEST
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Very good write here.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent_Composer on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 01:44:53 AM AEST
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A Beautiful dedication to the poets out there.
Very well done.


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:21:01 AM AEST
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Full of hope and inspiration to others a wonderful poem

Love Sweetangelukxxx


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:21:53 AM AEST
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Awww Bruce, *hugs* this is such a lovely friendly dedication to all the poets who are feleing abit down at the moment, you bring so much joy with your writes,

takecare

pixie xx


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:07:13 AM AEST
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Thankyou for the encouraging words to poets everywhere that need uplifting...
{I can never get enough of your poems}
absolutley brilliant!
cheers!


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:52:47 PM AEST
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very sweet Bruce
Michelle


Re: Don't Ever Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:54:55 AM AEST
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Nice sentiment,but it ain't never gonna happen for some of us. I believe some of us were put on this earth to be used, that's our lot in life. Maybe to atone for a previous life?? I dunno. :0( I liked this, though. Like I said.... great sentimnet. Oh and, as usual, great flow. :0)
Thumps ; 0)




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