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Array ( [sid] => 63070 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Picture Perfect [time] => 2004-09-08 22:23:17 [hometext] => A Masterpiece [bodytext] => This very beaufiful lady
who has brought a change in me
Who has brightened up my life
not hard for one to see
Things have been so different
since the day that I met her
Every emotion in my body
is constantly in a stir
I look into her eyes
I see her constant smile
I have a tingly feeling
I am totally beguiled
If someone had ever told me
that feelings like this exist
That I would feel this way
even when not being kissed
I would have looked at them in wonder
and laughed a little bit
Probably laughed a lot harder
until I was forced to quit
It has been a wonderful awakening
and I thank her in my mind
For being as she is
beautiful, gentle and kind
I love this fascinating woman
love her with my heart
I picture perfect woman
a true work of fine art [comments] => 9 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Bruce [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Picture Perfect

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:23:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



This very beaufiful lady
who has brought a change in me
Who has brightened up my life
not hard for one to see
Things have been so different
since the day that I met her
Every emotion in my body
is constantly in a stir
I look into her eyes
I see her constant smile
I have a tingly feeling
I am totally beguiled
If someone had ever told me
that feelings like this exist
That I would feel this way
even when not being kissed
I would have looked at them in wonder
and laughed a little bit
Probably laughed a lot harder
until I was forced to quit
It has been a wonderful awakening
and I thank her in my mind
For being as she is
beautiful, gentle and kind
I love this fascinating woman
love her with my heart
I picture perfect woman
a true work of fine art




Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-09-08 22:23:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:27:17 PM AEST
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i just love your poems like this. they make me go "awwww" and put a smile to my face.
this was so beautiful and sweet. it shows your love for her so well. almost makes me want to cry. beautiful. great work.
5 stars
Becky


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:29:44 PM AEST
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you definently have a masterpeice of beauty in this write.
Very sweet.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:57:31 PM AEST
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Ahhhh she is truly a picture perfect 'princess'..
Outstanding write....as always
Jenni


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:39:10 PM AEST
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Awwww, Bruce - this is so touching! I'm sure it made her feel 'perfectly wonderful'. I do hope you shared it with her! It is, truly, a beautiful gift to the woman you care for.

Thanks for sharing it with all of us,
SNM


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:15:20 AM AEST
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Bruce once again your words just flowed and created a masterpiece that is perfect warming my heart and soul so lovely
Michelle


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:25:24 AM AEST
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Word perfect. A glorious write.
So very beautiful for the woman you love excellent

Love Sweetangelukxxxx


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 06:27:03 AM AEST
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awwww like Becky said your poems also make me just want to go awwwwww, they are always so lovely and very warm

takecare

pixie xx


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:38:30 AM AEST
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Great emotion and flow. This lady must be fantastic to inspire you in this manner. Great write. Kudos.
Thumps ; 0)


Re: Picture Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Justalady on Monday, 13th September 2004 @ 12:40:43 PM AEST
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Words such as these make the heart smile, and every woman wish for such a honor. Truly beautiful not only in words but thought. June




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