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Array ( [sid] => 63043 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I will make it [time] => 2004-09-08 19:58:27 [hometext] => Hey this is a poem I just finished 5 mins ago n im posting it now, no worries um just lonely I assume ^_^ [bodytext] => Everyone these days just seems so complete,
As I sit here alone in silence and defeat,
What is it that Im missing deep inside?
Where my emotions linger, dwell and hide,
It feels as if I have half an empty soul,
Something just isn't there to make me whole,
I want so much to have strong arms around me,
To hold me in a loving imbrace for all to see clearly,
I want someone to love and call my own,
Not always having to be this way; alone,
I have made it this far all by myself before,
So why can't I do it longer, why not some more?
But is it what I want or what I need?
Should I learn to live at a slower speed?
I guess that I'll just wait until the right time,
When our stars cross and the planets align,
And I refuse to give up hope no matter what I do,
But no matter how hard the battle, I will make it through.
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I will make it

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:58:27 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Everyone these days just seems so complete,
As I sit here alone in silence and defeat,
What is it that Im missing deep inside?
Where my emotions linger, dwell and hide,
It feels as if I have half an empty soul,
Something just isn't there to make me whole,
I want so much to have strong arms around me,
To hold me in a loving imbrace for all to see clearly,
I want someone to love and call my own,
Not always having to be this way; alone,
I have made it this far all by myself before,
So why can't I do it longer, why not some more?
But is it what I want or what I need?
Should I learn to live at a slower speed?
I guess that I'll just wait until the right time,
When our stars cross and the planets align,
And I refuse to give up hope no matter what I do,
But no matter how hard the battle, I will make it through.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-09-08 19:58:27]
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Re: I will make it (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:05:13 PM AEST
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Awesome write!
Luv the last two lines as U r positive to make it.
great write!
luv, huggs, I will make it thru,
emy

Re: I will make it (User Rating: 1 )
by luna_mica on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:06:29 PM AEST
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i like it. alot. i know exactly what you are talking about. i write about loneliness all the time. nice poem.

Re: I will make it (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:15:53 PM AEST
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amazing. hrm i feel just like this except, i have no hope. ::shrugs:: live to fight another day, and hope its not a waste.

Re: I will make it (User Rating: 1 )
by CrazyBoy on Saturday, 13th January 2007 @ 07:49:35 AM AEST
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Nice write,giving me some hope,i know what it feels like in that place.makes me remember not to give up.Thanks

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