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Array ( [sid] => 63036 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Find My peace [time] => 2004-09-08 18:45:38 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT...they are very helpful [bodytext] => Please help me
find my peace
help me see
as I wander
lost in the fog
that has overcome my mind
I walk in a drunken way
trying to find my way
through the fog
which never seems to lift
But as I weave
across and around
the rocky road of my mind
I see a dim light
that seems to get
closer and closer
brighter and brighter
with each shaken step I take
I begin to walk in a straight line
no longer straying from the broken path
The fog is beginning to lift
and now all I have to figure out
is what I think is right [comments] => 4 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MnMnMsrcool [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Find My peace

Contributed by MnMnMsrcool on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:45:38 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Please help me
find my peace
help me see
as I wander
lost in the fog
that has overcome my mind
I walk in a drunken way
trying to find my way
through the fog
which never seems to lift
But as I weave
across and around
the rocky road of my mind
I see a dim light
that seems to get
closer and closer
brighter and brighter
with each shaken step I take
I begin to walk in a straight line
no longer straying from the broken path
The fog is beginning to lift
and now all I have to figure out
is what I think is right




Copyright © MnMnMsrcool ... [ 2004-09-08 18:45:38]
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Re: Find My peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:45:43 PM AEST
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I feel the same way all the time!!!


Re: Find My peace (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 07:48:42 PM AEST
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Very good write!
It's powerfull as it shows confussion but then u find the lite.
A masterepice of beauty.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: Find My peace (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:49:10 PM AEST
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your style seems similar to mine, except im more of a rhyme freak. sunny days are to come for the fog. do what you think is right, but consider the consequences =]


Re: Find My peace (User Rating: 1 )
by peaceinfear on Sunday, 12th February 2006 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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Very Very strong- i like your style :) PEace




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