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Array ( [sid] => 63012 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You... [time] => 2004-09-08 15:43:52 [hometext] => This is my first attempt trying to rhyme, AGH!! lolz.. But enjoy and comments very appreciated! thank you!! [bodytext] => Unbridled passion, irresistible desire…
Drowning in a sea of my endless thoughts of you,
My love for you is like a roaring fire!
Coursing mercilessly through…
Dearest lover of mine, rekindle this haggard soul,
Touch me again like you always do,
That feather-like caress will put me under your resolute control…
A sweet whisper; “I love you”…
Beautiful seraph, be mine for all eternity!
Precious star that is lost, join me in this place called Infinite Love…
Give me your bittersweet kiss; O how your lips brush against mine so enchantingly!
Dark angel, tainted being, fallen from above…
A child of the Darkness you have turned out to be,
Beauty beyond compare…
Open these blind eyes so I may see,
Your dark and morbid lair…
I sacrifice my heart, my soul, my very being,
So you may live…
You are what I have been seeking…
Anything and everything is what I am willing to give…
Gorgeous prince of shadows,
Come away with me in the night,
So we may kiss under the aging willows…
Look into my eyes, and we’ll take flight…
Entwined into one glorious existence, we have become…
And as you take the last drop of me,
I can only sigh with pleasure; a quiet demand from your silken lips, “Come.”
Resistance is futile, and that is how it shall always be…


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You...

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:43:52 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Unbridled passion, irresistible desire…
Drowning in a sea of my endless thoughts of you,
My love for you is like a roaring fire!
Coursing mercilessly through…
Dearest lover of mine, rekindle this haggard soul,
Touch me again like you always do,
That feather-like caress will put me under your resolute control…
A sweet whisper; “I love you”…
Beautiful seraph, be mine for all eternity!
Precious star that is lost, join me in this place called Infinite Love…
Give me your bittersweet kiss; O how your lips brush against mine so enchantingly!
Dark angel, tainted being, fallen from above…
A child of the Darkness you have turned out to be,
Beauty beyond compare…
Open these blind eyes so I may see,
Your dark and morbid lair…
I sacrifice my heart, my soul, my very being,
So you may live…
You are what I have been seeking…
Anything and everything is what I am willing to give…
Gorgeous prince of shadows,
Come away with me in the night,
So we may kiss under the aging willows…
Look into my eyes, and we’ll take flight…
Entwined into one glorious existence, we have become…
And as you take the last drop of me,
I can only sigh with pleasure; a quiet demand from your silken lips, “Come.”
Resistance is futile, and that is how it shall always be…






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Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:52:36 PM AEST
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Nice job. I like the wording.


Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 04:31:26 PM AEST
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Very good for a first attempt a at rhyme! Keep trying this style, you've got good talent at it.
I also like the wording a lot.
Take care.
David


Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 05:36:46 PM AEST
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bravo bravo I enjoy the steam aas well
Michelle


Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 05:43:10 PM AEST
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And we have come full circle, my mark on every page, and at the last ... a familiar phrase ... with your captivating wods that still entice and invite. Fires smoldering within, flare up and blaze again, and all due to words, your words.

Beautiful are they, and you.

Nazmythian ~


Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 08:10:39 PM AEST
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This is lovely. Such longing, so clearly expressed. It is really quite touching.

Very well done!
SNM


Re: You... (User Rating: 1 )
by KHANVICT on Thursday, 29th September 2011 @ 06:45:48 PM AEST
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Not bad for your first attempt at rhyming. KEEP IT UP




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