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Array ( [sid] => 62993 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walking Through The Park [time] => 2004-09-08 12:12:57 [hometext] => Walking [bodytext] => You Make Me Smile, were the last words that I wrote
I will continue with my story, on a slightly different note
We are walking holding hands, as we stroll through the park
Just enjoying one another, as dawn turns into dark
The time just flying bye, not concerning us at all
Walking Through The Park, beautiful flowers and trees so tall
How wonderful it is, just being there with you
What you have created, a feeling I never knew
How lucky could I be, to have another chance
To be with one so wonderful, enjoying this last dance

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Walking Through The Park

Contributed by Bruce on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:12:57 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



You Make Me Smile, were the last words that I wrote
I will continue with my story, on a slightly different note
We are walking holding hands, as we stroll through the park
Just enjoying one another, as dawn turns into dark
The time just flying bye, not concerning us at all
Walking Through The Park, beautiful flowers and trees so tall
How wonderful it is, just being there with you
What you have created, a feeling I never knew
How lucky could I be, to have another chance
To be with one so wonderful, enjoying this last dance





Copyright © Bruce ... [ 2004-09-08 12:12:57]
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Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:22:53 PM AEST
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Awww Bruce how lovely, :) *hugs*


pixie xx


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFawn on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:32:09 PM AEST
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Being with the one you love makes everything around you more beautiful. Very romantic verse Bruce.

WinterFawn


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by poetmarie on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 01:59:40 PM AEST
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I agree - very romantic. Have experienced this myself.


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:23:03 PM AEST
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I love this so pretty Bruce
Michelle


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by BrandySwanson on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 03:21:47 PM AEST
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so very beautifully written and so very romantic. loved it great job

Brandy


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 08:57:50 PM AEST
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very pretty


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 10:35:07 PM AEST
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very pretty and loving like always Bruce.
i simply love your writes.
well done.
Becky


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 12:11:40 PM AEST
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Aww that was so sweet and lovely


Love sweetangelukxxx


Re: Walking Through The Park (User Rating: 1 )
by veramouse on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 06:23:07 AM AEST
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lovely poem,
it conjures up the scent of frangipani
i wonder why?
must have been in another lifetime.
Vera,x




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