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Array ( [sid] => 62924 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Hidden Love [time] => 2004-09-07 18:47:33 [hometext] => This may sound strange but if you live with more than one woman, you'll know what I'm talking about guys. [bodytext] => Every day I live with it
These horrid sounds of hate
PMS thrives monthly
I can definitely wait

Hatred pulses, rumors flying
Always thinking that I’m wrong
In their eyes I’m always lying
They’ve thought this for so long

All these words are suffocating
They hang me inch by inch
Death by hatred suffocation
Death is not my wish

If i am to survive the hate
I only want one thing
The love of someone dear to me
Because she lets me sing

This woman does not glare at me
If ever I mess up
She only smiles, pretends not to notice,
And helps me get back up

Take a guess at who it is
I'll bet you that you're wrong
You do not know who it is I love
The essence of my song

She doesn't know my feelings
She is the one for which I long
She just really doesn't notice
As I sing to her my song

Please notice me, and listen
To this song of mine
Please hear the notes I'm singing
Look beneath the words that rhyme

I love you deep within my heart
And deep within my soul
I love you truly, deeper still
Than you will ever know [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => mcloysoccer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Hidden Love

Contributed by mcloysoccer on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 06:47:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Every day I live with it
These horrid sounds of hate
PMS thrives monthly
I can definitely wait

Hatred pulses, rumors flying
Always thinking that I’m wrong
In their eyes I’m always lying
They’ve thought this for so long

All these words are suffocating
They hang me inch by inch
Death by hatred suffocation
Death is not my wish

If i am to survive the hate
I only want one thing
The love of someone dear to me
Because she lets me sing

This woman does not glare at me
If ever I mess up
She only smiles, pretends not to notice,
And helps me get back up

Take a guess at who it is
I'll bet you that you're wrong
You do not know who it is I love
The essence of my song

She doesn't know my feelings
She is the one for which I long
She just really doesn't notice
As I sing to her my song

Please notice me, and listen
To this song of mine
Please hear the notes I'm singing
Look beneath the words that rhyme

I love you deep within my heart
And deep within my soul
I love you truly, deeper still
Than you will ever know




Copyright © mcloysoccer ... [ 2004-09-07 18:47:33]
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Re: The Hidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetheart on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 08:48:45 PM AEST
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Very good write..:)..I would try and guess our choir teacher, but I don't think your in love with her..lol. I really enjoyed this one.


Re: The Hidden Love (User Rating: 1 )
by jennalove on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 09:02:24 PM AEST
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wow..i must say your outlook on women surprised me but it's a very nice write...you must really be in love with this girl..good job




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