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Array ( [sid] => 62918 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Journeys [time] => 2004-09-07 17:42:23 [hometext] => I think this would sound a lot better if you heard me play it. It's not my best but I've decided to share it with y'all anyways. I just wanted to post something. So enjoy! [bodytext] => This weight, this burden
Is more than I can take
It haunts me in my dreams,
And even when I am awake.
Father in Heaven
Please be with me tonight
Let me finish what was started,
Help me to put up a fight.

You're all I need to get me through
All I need is you.
Jesus help me bear this burden
All I need is you.

Months have passed
Seasons have changed
Time moves too quickly
It seems so strange.
My road is steep and rocky
The way for me is dark
This journey isn't easy now
So Lord, please change my heart.

Jesus, I am weak
But I know that you are strong
And I know that when I need you
You will guide my feet along. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 482 [topic] => 34 [informant] => hooray_its_jen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

Journeys

Contributed by hooray_its_jen on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:42:23 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

This weight, this burden
Is more than I can take
It haunts me in my dreams,
And even when I am awake.
Father in Heaven
Please be with me tonight
Let me finish what was started,
Help me to put up a fight.

You're all I need to get me through
All I need is you.
Jesus help me bear this burden
All I need is you.

Months have passed
Seasons have changed
Time moves too quickly
It seems so strange.
My road is steep and rocky
The way for me is dark
This journey isn't easy now
So Lord, please change my heart.

Jesus, I am weak
But I know that you are strong
And I know that when I need you
You will guide my feet along.

Copyright © hooray_its_jen ... [ 2004-09-07 17:42:23]
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Re: Journeys (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:01:15 PM AEST
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For some reason I expected this song to be far more dark....but I still enjoyed this very much. I especailly liked..." So Lord, change my heart." I feel like that a lot of the time. Thank you for sharing something so rare and beatiful.
ALINA

Re: Journeys (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 08:14:24 PM AEST
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Jenn, this is beautiful. I was glad to look up and see they were lyrics to a song and not your feeling right now. Hug Anna for me and yourself.

Rita

Re: Journeys (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 10:03:26 PM AEST
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This is awesome. Great lyrics.

Spazzo

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