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my thoughts and secrets becoming fear
so scared to let go of this life
tired struggling through this strife

not sure if he will let me say goodbye
I think he is ready for me to die
people keep telling me they care
my final heartbeat more than they could bare

so much pain living here now
I am ready to take on final bow
prepared to take death head on
no more bruises, they will be gone
one final heart beat is here to stay,
just can't stand living another day

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My Final Heartbeat

Contributed by screwup on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 02:58:08 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

my final heartbeat is drawing near
my thoughts and secrets becoming fear
so scared to let go of this life
tired struggling through this strife

not sure if he will let me say goodbye
I think he is ready for me to die
people keep telling me they care
my final heartbeat more than they could bare

so much pain living here now
I am ready to take on final bow
prepared to take death head on
no more bruises, they will be gone
one final heart beat is here to stay,
just can't stand living another day

Copyright © screwup ... [ 2004-09-07 14:58:08]
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Re: My Final Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 03:38:10 PM AEST
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the feeling of futility is so prevalent throughout the piece.....very morose but quite passive.....almost eerie.......good good write......hope you are well.....

Re: My Final Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:52:21 PM AEST
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Very good write.......how we must share the midnight oil, when we write for fear of sleep, but wish and dream of the final rest, no more to be in pain.

Thanks for sharing.

Re: My Final Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 11:01:00 AM AEST
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please say that you're not seious about ths! this is good, but idon't want to loose you!

Re: My Final Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 09:56:36 PM AEST
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excellent write. hope springs eternal.

Re: My Final Heartbeat (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 09:01:08 PM AEST
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Deanna...
Great poem... u read this one to me... but when I read it I feel the raw emotions churning...
Well expressed... yeah when U feel this way call me babe...
~Donna~

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