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Array ( [sid] => 62843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MuRdEr Me [time] => 2004-09-07 04:34:33 [hometext] => comments would be great!!! [bodytext] => Murder me
but do it right
make me suffer
and accept my plight.
Make me hurt
let me scream
make me watch
as you wipe the blade clean.
Slice me up
nice and deep
down my throat
the blood will creep
Force the pills into my mouth
grab my hair
rip it clean from my scalp.
Listen to me whimper
as you drag me to my fate.
Secure the noose
nice and tight
kick the chair
send me into flight.
Laugh at me as you watch me squirm
dispose of my body
revel in the smell as it burns... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Delusions [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

MuRdEr Me

Contributed by Delusions on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 04:34:33 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Murder me
but do it right
make me suffer
and accept my plight.
Make me hurt
let me scream
make me watch
as you wipe the blade clean.
Slice me up
nice and deep
down my throat
the blood will creep
Force the pills into my mouth
grab my hair
rip it clean from my scalp.
Listen to me whimper
as you drag me to my fate.
Secure the noose
nice and tight
kick the chair
send me into flight.
Laugh at me as you watch me squirm
dispose of my body
revel in the smell as it burns...

Copyright © Delusions ... [ 2004-09-07 04:34:33]
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Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:24:45 AM AEST
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what a pretty little poem, good little poem, its like a cuddly rotveiler nice one

Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 11:08:28 AM AEST
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beautifuly written.....just ... beautiful...lol

but seriously with all sarcasm aside...great write..i really enjoyed this....so dark and beautuful all at the same time.....

Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 01:23:38 AM AEST
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strangely compelling and beautiful. i don't know how u can write this poetry that mixes totally different emotions together to make such a awesome poem. u truly r a great writer. i member when u first wrote this poem and showed it to me...was brilliant then and i still think it is...keep writing!!
luv becca

Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 08:20:35 AM AEST
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I loved it
Oh yes
definatly my kind of thing

8 out of 5

Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by tWiStLe on Monday, 18th October 2004 @ 02:33:26 AM AEST
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Like bec, i was there wen u wrote this... which makes me understand more why u are so talented with this stuff... it just pours from your mind out of no where..... poetry to me is about getting out ur emotions and experiences and/or causing emotion and reactions in others so they can understand and feel it too... and u can seem to do this almost every time.
Luv ur otha half!

Re: MuRdEr Me (User Rating: 1 )
by crystalfire on Wednesday, 15th June 2005 @ 05:15:14 PM AEST
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So gory, so evil, so cunning...I love it! Good job, wonderful imagery!

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