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Array ( [sid] => 62808 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Last Journy [time] => 2004-09-06 19:37:03 [hometext] => Lately my poetry has been going downhill this will probelly be the last one i submit for a while......i need to build up more anger so i can write well again....hope you like it [bodytext] => You saw the product of it all
rose to the top just to fall
damage is done
like a crumpled up paper
I cant be perfect again
is this the cure
or the disease
walk all over me
as I pray on bloddy knees
come walk in
my world of wonders
now you see
why I live down under
hell bound or not
I really dont care
where I end up
has to be fair
way on top just to fall
this could have been anyones call
I cant seem to make it go away
I cant seem to make it stop
thats the way it is
when your body fully drops
death awaits around the bend
this could be my last journy
this could be the end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Luka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Last Journy

Contributed by Luka on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:37:03 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You saw the product of it all
rose to the top just to fall
damage is done
like a crumpled up paper
I cant be perfect again
is this the cure
or the disease
walk all over me
as I pray on bloddy knees
come walk in
my world of wonders
now you see
why I live down under
hell bound or not
I really dont care
where I end up
has to be fair
way on top just to fall
this could have been anyones call
I cant seem to make it go away
I cant seem to make it stop
thats the way it is
when your body fully drops
death awaits around the bend
this could be my last journy
this could be the end

Copyright © Luka ... [ 2004-09-06 19:37:03]
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Re: Last Journy (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:43:23 PM AEST
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I like the poem, very descriptive. But I'm not sure I agree with the author's introductory statement, I don't believe you have to be angry to write well. ( strictly my opinion )

Nazmythian ~

Re: Last Journy (User Rating: 1 )
by Xeald on Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 05:58:14 PM AEST
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i didnt read the poem but i just want to say: when are we cuttin the hair? you have your away message on so i did it hear.....
_+MaTt_+

i had to sign up and everytning it was a pain....

Re: Last Journy (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 09:26:04 PM AEST
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I agree with Naz completely.... I like the poem and I think you should keep writing... anger or no anger.

Hoping you'll consider it,
SNM

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