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His dark head is like yours
Laughter his favorite song
As he rides high above the crowds
Your shoulders as his horse
Teetering back and forth
I follow, enchanted with the scene
Knowing this is us, somehow
Within our secret dream
He turns to wave at me
His blue eyes full of mirth
Happiness is but a breath
To breathe and it is gone
Like dreams disperse in mist
Their secrets safely kept
Shared only in the heart

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The Boy

Contributed by Merry on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:08:09 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

______________________

His dark head is like yours
Laughter his favorite song
As he rides high above the crowds
Your shoulders as his horse
Teetering back and forth
I follow, enchanted with the scene
Knowing this is us, somehow
Within our secret dream
He turns to wave at me
His blue eyes full of mirth
Happiness is but a breath
To breathe and it is gone
Like dreams disperse in mist
Their secrets safely kept
Shared only in the heart

Copyright © Merry ... [ 2004-09-06 17:08:09]
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Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:40:15 PM AEST
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wow this is absolutely beautiful *

Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:42:55 PM AEST
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awwww merry, somethings so fleeting, while others are with us forever. well done.

Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:25:10 PM AEST
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very nicely written

Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 02:38:48 PM AEST
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( Sighs and thinks....damn I love the way you write)

Roses..you know where...for my daisy
Larry

Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Biker on Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 01:06:18 PM AEST
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Merry
your writting is like a fine composed photograph. Can see the main subject in sharp focused color, the rest is mono and out of focus. Oh...you forgot the Bandana ;o)

Hugs and XXX
r r

Re: The Boy (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 07:39:54 AM AEST
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Children are such an incredible inspiration. Filled with mystical qualities, innocence, purity. Wonderful as always.
Stitch

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