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Array ( [sid] => 62791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Or Real [time] => 2004-09-06 16:42:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Anticipation burns
with the kisses
of discarded promises.

Everywhere I look
distorted perspective
looms helter skelter
pleading for an answer.

But when perspective
is all you have
fixing, would seem
to be the problem,
not the solution.

When remembering tomorrow,
the next minute may not feel
quite as important.
or real. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 48 [informant] => emospaztic [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Or Real

Contributed by emospaztic on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:42:41 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Anticipation burns
with the kisses
of discarded promises.

Everywhere I look
distorted perspective
looms helter skelter
pleading for an answer.

But when perspective
is all you have
fixing, would seem
to be the problem,
not the solution.

When remembering tomorrow,
the next minute may not feel
quite as important.
or real.

Copyright © emospaztic ... [ 2004-09-06 16:42:41]
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Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Dreama on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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I really liked this! good food for thought!
keep up the good work =)

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by DragonLuvSong on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 07:00:22 PM AEST
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i really liked this read, it seems so simple that i love it. but then again the simples things are what contain so much.

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:05:53 PM AEST
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amazing write.

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Thursday, 9th September 2004 @ 05:01:18 PM AEST
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You have a very graceful, comfortable use of language. There's a fluency that is not at all strained. I like this one very much.

Andrew

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 04:59:23 PM AEST
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well written once again,very good poetry.

wildejohnny.

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 09:40:50 PM AEST
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U mus have the i. Q. of a geneus. I know that's spelled wrong, sorry.
u write like a master of the written word.
Great work!
U remind me of one of my really special friends ofcourse with a different pen name.
Still it's remarlable writing.
luv, huiggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by sammydid on Tuesday, 14th September 2004 @ 04:02:40 PM AEST
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pretty f'in awesome

-natalie

Re: Or Real (User Rating: 1 )
by EmoDCgirl36 on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 10:11:52 PM AEST
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So emo! Haha. This was a great piece I must say that I understand how you feel. It's so hard to live for another minute sometimes. Or at least that's what I think you're saying. If not please tell me.

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