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Array ( [sid] => 62750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Staring me [time] => 2004-09-06 11:21:26 [hometext] => comments please [bodytext] => You think you know mw
But you know me not
Can you understand
My crazy plot
Where I am
The hero
and the foe
Twist and turns
are always there
death is lingring
Then a shine of hope
put out
as soon as it came
where I play
the whole cast
so many faces
so many lines
do you think you still know me
think again [comments] => 2 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 61 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Staring me

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 11:21:26 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

You think you know mw
But you know me not
Can you understand
My crazy plot
Where I am
The hero
and the foe
Twist and turns
are always there
death is lingring
Then a shine of hope
put out
as soon as it came
where I play
the whole cast
so many faces
so many lines
do you think you still know me
think again

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-09-06 11:21:26]
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Re: Staring me (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 05:48:25 PM AEST
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very unique and interesting style
i really like the way you put "I am The hero and the foe"
very well written*

Re: Staring me (User Rating: 1 )
by ginnginn11 on Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 04:32:44 PM AEST
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i really like it but i didn't really understand it...

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