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Array ( [sid] => 62727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Jerk [time] => 2004-09-06 01:38:56 [hometext] => Been a while since I was here. Thought it was time to come back, maybe? I don't really know. This poem is angry for sure. [bodytext] => Jerk I hate you, I told you how I felt,
You comforted me and said things to make my heart melt,
I was still fragile but my anger started to subside,
Then you were a jerk, how we said goodbye was why I cried.

Jerk I hate you, but this cut I dug deep for you,
Jerk I hate you but this proves I love you too.
This cut I feel guilty for cutting, I cry more,
You promised you would never hurt me! That I was worth dying for!

Whether you meant to or not I feel as though you lied,
You hurt me! You hurt me! Oh you left me there and I cried.
I cried for you to go, go away, I can do this on my own.
You left me with another pain for my heart to moan.

Jerk I hate you, I hate you more to this very day,
You had no right to treat my life that way,
Jerk, I was a fool, my dreams meant nothing to you.
And jerk there is only one logical thing left for me to do

GOODBYE!
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Jerk

Contributed by EmSal on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:38:56 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Jerk I hate you, I told you how I felt,
You comforted me and said things to make my heart melt,
I was still fragile but my anger started to subside,
Then you were a jerk, how we said goodbye was why I cried.

Jerk I hate you, but this cut I dug deep for you,
Jerk I hate you but this proves I love you too.
This cut I feel guilty for cutting, I cry more,
You promised you would never hurt me! That I was worth dying for!

Whether you meant to or not I feel as though you lied,
You hurt me! You hurt me! Oh you left me there and I cried.
I cried for you to go, go away, I can do this on my own.
You left me with another pain for my heart to moan.

Jerk I hate you, I hate you more to this very day,
You had no right to treat my life that way,
Jerk, I was a fool, my dreams meant nothing to you.
And jerk there is only one logical thing left for me to do

GOODBYE!




Copyright © EmSal ... [ 2004-09-06 01:38:56]
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Re: Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_girl121 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:00:10 AM AEST
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hey i liked your poem but trust me cutting doesnt solve things, been there done that... it only made things worse for me and my friends are what helped me out ...



Re: Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:05:02 AM AEST
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this was a very frantic poem, or it feeled frantic, which shows what your going through and the confusion your in very well. Cutting is extremly bad for you, from first hand expierience. I still do it though, so I wont speak anymore on the subject, as I'd be a hypocrit
Good write


Re: Jerk (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st January 2006 @ 04:16:07 PM AEST
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great poem! really nice piece of solid anger.




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