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Array ( [sid] => 62722 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PICK A NEW [time] => 2004-09-06 00:57:43 [hometext] => No comment [bodytext] =>
~~designed by Aina~~
Silently U plan your attack.
Pat yourself on the back.
Now feel better 'bout you?
Keep telling yourself it's true.
Pick a new number dear.
Been joshed before, no fear.
Pick your next victom.
Go ahead, pretend U won.
Write a new story boy
"cause this gals, no toy.
It's really been lotsa fun
but this fantasy's done.
Not personal please understand
Fantay's sometimes get out of hand.
Thanks for all awesome inspiration.
It's really been a kick and fun.
Trading fantasy 4 reality. [comments] => 14 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 34 [informant] => emystar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
PICK A NEW
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emystar
on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:57:43 AM in AEST
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~~designed by Aina~~
Silently U plan your attack.
Pat yourself on the back.
Now feel better 'bout you?
Keep telling yourself it's true.
Pick a new number dear.
Been joshed before, no fear.
Pick your next victom.
Go ahead, pretend U won.
Write a new story boy
"cause this gals, no toy.
It's really been lotsa fun
but this fantasy's done.
Not personal please understand
Fantay's sometimes get out of hand.
Thanks for all awesome inspiration.
It's really been a kick and fun.
Trading fantasy 4 reality.
Copyright ©
emystar
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by wild_girl121 on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 01:56:27 AM AEST
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good write i like it...... keep posting.
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by venkat on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:35:25 AM AEST
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Deep and thoughtful..:-) venkat
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by DreamWeaver on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:49:23 AM AEST
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I'm so very very sorry ... after reading this I can only sympathise as I know all too well the journey you have taken ... a poem that expresses very clearly what you needed to say ... well done, Jan
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by AspenGlow on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:35:36 AM AEST
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Sad yes, one's fantasy is anothers dream of reality...how cruel to wake to the cold harsh reality of it all.
Beautiful write, thank you for sharing.
Chris
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by Kie on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:42:20 AM AEST
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It sounds like someone has hurt you and broke your trust.
The poem touched my heart. Talk to me Emy, anytime okay?
Kie
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by critterhideaway on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:00:39 AM AEST
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Beautiful, sometimes it is very hard to give up the dream and fantasy, but we do and life goes on. Thank you for this verse and music
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by inoc on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 10:01:25 AM AEST
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a sensitive poem
all the best for your future !
greatly written
cheers!
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by sweetangeluk on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 02:13:16 PM AEST
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Aww Emmy hope you are ok love.
A wonderful poem yet so sad take care and be strong emmy
Loved the pic and the music
Love Sweetangelukxxxxx
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by Former_Member on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 04:39:28 PM AEST
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A sad but beautiful write.
wildejohnny.
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by katyqueen35 on Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 01:07:25 AM AEST
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Sad and touching .
very moving write.
great write.
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by Rhei76 on Friday, 10th September 2004 @ 12:47:32 AM AEST
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well said
God bless
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by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 08:26:57 PM AEST
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Sad and touching write.
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by Hurretje on Friday, 8th October 2004 @ 07:46:12 AM AEST
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Haunting words that get straight at your heart...
A good write.
Hugs,
Hur
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by deadreckoning1983 on Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 11:43:39 PM AEST
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mmmmm this one had some bite to it. like a kick in the pants or something, i hope i never offend you!!! : ) this was a very spirited write. excellent.
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