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Array ( [sid] => 62700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Inner Battle [time] => 2004-09-05 21:53:49 [hometext] => The poem starts of with me telling my inner self to let me go, to help me out with the emotions that were eating me away, then it explains how i cant move on and how iam slowly dieing inside. hope you enjoy, comments please. [bodytext] => burn off my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
refuse the feelings that lie hidden within

burn of my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
release me, i want to be free

and each time I take a step foward
Iam pulled back by magic
and bound even tighter to my heart

I cry, asking for guidance
but Iam neglected by divinity
for Ive pushed myself far away from my roots

I no longer live
I no longer breath
Iam dead
without a heaven to reach out for
Iam lost,
I bleed. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => silverjade [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Inner Battle

Contributed by silverjade on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

burn off my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
refuse the feelings that lie hidden within

burn of my sorrow
breathe in my relieve
release me, i want to be free

and each time I take a step foward
Iam pulled back by magic
and bound even tighter to my heart

I cry, asking for guidance
but Iam neglected by divinity
for Ive pushed myself far away from my roots

I no longer live
I no longer breath
Iam dead
without a heaven to reach out for
Iam lost,
I bleed.

Copyright © silverjade ... [ 2004-09-05 21:53:49]
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Re: Inner Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:28:02 PM AEST
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aww nice work but u outa know we dont control everything about ourselves,i really do hope u dont feel like ur dead and theres no heavens to reach,well anyways great work and keep it up

savedbydeath

Re: Inner Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:29:55 PM AEST
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well some of the grammar mistakes in this made this confusing. i had no idea what you were meaning in some of this. everyone is lost all of the time. they are never found as you might say. if you let your emotions get to you, they will eventually destroy you.

Re: Inner Battle (User Rating: 1 )
by silverjade on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 10:36:35 PM AEST
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yeah i know but the point of this poem is to let others know how everyone is in costant battle with themselves.

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