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Array ( [sid] => 62674 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => a beautiful loch [time] => 2004-09-05 18:38:59 [hometext] => i've just had a week up scotland and found the place so tranquil.. [bodytext] => it's so peacful, quiet and tranquil.
i sit beside the loch, one of many..
scotland is such a beautiful country..

theres a small ripple,
as i look i see a head popping out of the water..
is it nessie i wonder,
no of course it isn't..

there it is again, the small head..
i strain my eyes to see and watch..
i give a smile, if i'm quiet it will come again..

there's not one but two,
there otters, such beautiful animals..
sleek and smooth, they cut through the water..
diving and cutting eachother up as they play,

what beautiful animals in a beautiful loch.. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 642 [topic] => 27 [informant] => karrie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => NaturePoetry )

a beautiful loch

Contributed by karrie on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:38:59 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

it's so peacful, quiet and tranquil.
i sit beside the loch, one of many..
scotland is such a beautiful country..

theres a small ripple,
as i look i see a head popping out of the water..
is it nessie i wonder,
no of course it isn't..

there it is again, the small head..
i strain my eyes to see and watch..
i give a smile, if i'm quiet it will come again..

there's not one but two,
there otters, such beautiful animals..
sleek and smooth, they cut through the water..
diving and cutting eachother up as they play,

what beautiful animals in a beautiful loch..

Copyright © karrie ... [ 2004-09-05 18:38:59]
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Re: a beautiful loch (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:06:17 PM AEST
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That's a beautiful memory. It's a break from all the sad poetry. thanks God Bless

Re: a beautiful loch (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 07:18:57 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery... it makes me a bit envious (i haven't made it to scotland quite yet)... great poem*

Re: a beautiful loch (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 03:00:49 AM AEST
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That's only the part that's advertised. There's a lot more than lochs and otters, but I'm glad you enjoyed yourself, and wrote this poem of your experience of Morangee.

Keep writing - and commenting.

Re: a beautiful loch (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 11:10:43 AM AEST
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I can just imagine it, sitting there sipping whisky....well in my case it would be, perhaps not in yours :)
It was a nice mood to create

Steve

Re: a beautiful loch (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:31:04 PM AEST
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good write

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