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Array ( [sid] => 62661 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Nothing Seems Right [time] => 2004-09-05 16:22:36 [hometext] => meh read and you will know.. comment if you like... I know I am not alone you don't need to tell me though... [bodytext] => What do you do
When nothing seems right?
When everything is messed up
When you’re confused?
When you thought you were stronger
Then ever before
But all of a sudden
You turn out weaker than ever.

You start coming out
From behind your wall
But end up finding out your wall
Was the place where you need to be the most

When people get close is
When you get hurt the most
When people start to see the real you
Is when you get hurt

When people realize
That there is something wrong
It’ll be too late to help
When too many years
Equals way too much pain

Where there is too much pain
To care anymore
Care about anything
When your friends are the only things
That matter
Even when you don’t want to hurt them
Yet the only way to keep yourself
Sane is to stay how you are
Wanting your friends
To know that
That they mean to world to yah
So you are helping them the only way
You know how

Staying how I am
Is only hurting me
Cause no one really knows
The ***** I have been through
The pain I have

No one will know how much
Pain I really have
Cause I will never talk about anything
From now on
My hopes, dreams, pain, anything
To do with my emotions
No one will ever really know
I can’t cause anymore pain to anyone
I will remain with no problems

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 61 [informant] => oreo_kisses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Nothing Seems Right

Contributed by oreo_kisses on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:22:36 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



What do you do
When nothing seems right?
When everything is messed up
When you’re confused?
When you thought you were stronger
Then ever before
But all of a sudden
You turn out weaker than ever.

You start coming out
From behind your wall
But end up finding out your wall
Was the place where you need to be the most

When people get close is
When you get hurt the most
When people start to see the real you
Is when you get hurt

When people realize
That there is something wrong
It’ll be too late to help
When too many years
Equals way too much pain

Where there is too much pain
To care anymore
Care about anything
When your friends are the only things
That matter
Even when you don’t want to hurt them
Yet the only way to keep yourself
Sane is to stay how you are
Wanting your friends
To know that
That they mean to world to yah
So you are helping them the only way
You know how

Staying how I am
Is only hurting me
Cause no one really knows
The ***** I have been through
The pain I have

No one will know how much
Pain I really have
Cause I will never talk about anything
From now on
My hopes, dreams, pain, anything
To do with my emotions
No one will ever really know
I can’t cause anymore pain to anyone
I will remain with no problems





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Re: Nothing Seems Right (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:35:33 PM AEST
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never speak of your pain and the lies will eat at you... would be nice to put things aside and move on in life, but yea - you FEEL all alone. sad write, but i like it.
~Remy~




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