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Array ( [sid] => 62637 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue [time] => 2004-09-05 13:15:58 [hometext] => this originally was a suicide note i was leaving for my friends, i couldnt take all the bs that was happening and this is what came out of it.. [bodytext] => Blue has faded
Become so jaded
Into an ugly grey
She was broken hearted
Didn't know how it started
But she sighs when she sees it's only May

For 16 years, nothing but pain and fears
Have built up on her tiny heart
She gives a nervous laugh when she sees her tears
As she slowly comes apart
Feeding on nothing
But hate and destruction
She wishes for her life to end
But alas, as its happened in the past
Death for her never comes

Wishing and waiting
Her dire dreams fading
Into a black and white world
She looks in the mirror
Sees blood and tears
Slicing her wrists
It's the end [comments] => 3 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 36 [informant] => CrimsonOrgazm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Blue

Contributed by CrimsonOrgazm on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 01:15:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Blue has faded
Become so jaded
Into an ugly grey
She was broken hearted
Didn't know how it started
But she sighs when she sees it's only May

For 16 years, nothing but pain and fears
Have built up on her tiny heart
She gives a nervous laugh when she sees her tears
As she slowly comes apart
Feeding on nothing
But hate and destruction
She wishes for her life to end
But alas, as its happened in the past
Death for her never comes

Wishing and waiting
Her dire dreams fading
Into a black and white world
She looks in the mirror
Sees blood and tears
Slicing her wrists
It's the end

Copyright © CrimsonOrgazm ... [ 2004-09-05 13:15:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 01:28:37 PM AEST
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awww such a sad and tragic write, sorry you feel so bad,

pixie xx

Re: Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 02:15:24 PM AEST
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When I read this i had chills. I felt the same way just three years ago. I am happy now and i only wish you happyness and many great things to come your way. Good write.

Re: Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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MAGNIFICENT! dear lord how i love your poetry... it expresses every nook and cranny of emotion and u do it so wonderfully! I love ur work! But best of luck and i do wish you happiness.

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