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[aid] => mick
[title] => Fairy Tale
[time] => 2004-09-05 01:46:09
[hometext] => My thoughts on this god of which people speak.
[bodytext] => This elaborate fairy tale pulls you in. It ties you up with a string and it won’t let you go. It holds you tightly and binds your mind. Soon you cannot think of anything other then the lies you hear. They are very good a weaving a yarn. They only tell you what they want you hear. You never hear the truth about their hero Because they pretend that part is the lie. Well here is what I think about their savoir. He is just a made up being to help those around the world. They felt too lonely and misguided. No one seemed to know what the truth really was. So came this god that every one speaks of. He is only there to help those that feel alone. Now why do I feel like no one else can see this? That he is just like a story you tell to children before bed. So please don’t tell me I’m lost with out him. Can’t you see it is you that is lost? Find your self, don’t hide behind him. He can’t save any better then you can save your self. A scapegoat is not what you need. There is no real reason for the pain in the world Other then people believing god will fix it all. Because when they do, they don’t try to fix it themselves. Don’t you see your god is hurting you more Then he could ever help you? As long as you think, he will save you I know That you will never save yourself. So please, close the good book and throw it away. It rots your brain and fills you with untrue beliefs. Once you rid yourself of that fantasy Then you will see, that he kept you under a lock and key. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 145 [topic] => 11 [informant] => SlimStaple [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
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