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Array ( [sid] => 62580 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Disaster [time] => 2004-09-04 22:44:52 [hometext] => [bodytext] => People come into this nightmare world,
But what do they see, nothing but,
The colours, beauty and desire,
I don’t see, my heart is sore and cut!

How the hell can anyone live here?!
How can anyone say or think its fun?
Just let me out of this misery and pain,
All this stress and despair ways a ton!

Let me go, let me fly from this world,
Away from here, away from everyone,
Into the never ending darkness,
Of another world, no more burdens!

Who should or would ever care,
Yes I know, I know the answer too,
No one would, and no one does,
Trapped alone like a bird in a zoo!

Flying alone to my destiny,
For I’ am gone, empty and only a shell,
Forget me, and forget that I existed,
At long last I’ am released from this hell!

My life has faded away before my eyes,
A closed and totally dimmed out gem,
I can’t pretend to belong any longer,
I need to leave, be true to who I really am!

I’m gone; I’ve never been here,
All was an illusion, fake and un-true,
Say your goodbyes to me, and be done,
Because I’m going away to become new!

Emptiness has me in its grips,
I wrestle with my conscience,
But soon enough it gropes at me,
The world is getting its Vengeance!

I feel it closer; I’m nearing the end,
Moving further away from you,
Damn this razor blade edging,
After my lifetime pledging!

Damn you and Damn everyone else,
I’m sick of this place, I’m sick of it all,
I want to be far away from here,
My emotions, up and down like a ball!

Outside here all alone, cold and dark,
Waiting for the moment, to let it go,
Just slice, you’ll see the thin line appear,
I can’t feel the pain, but I see the blood flow!


Twist the knife deeper; I need to feel the pain,
Feel the reality of this world around me,
Slowly falling away, it’s dripping on the ground,
Life is slipping, my eyes are blurry I can hardly see!

The worlds turning black around me,
I feel cold, the worlds blinking on and off,
I’m shaking terribly; I’m plunging down,
I slip to the ground; my body goes limp and soft!


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bite_me [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Disaster

Contributed by bite_me on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:44:52 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



People come into this nightmare world,
But what do they see, nothing but,
The colours, beauty and desire,
I don’t see, my heart is sore and cut!

How the hell can anyone live here?!
How can anyone say or think its fun?
Just let me out of this misery and pain,
All this stress and despair ways a ton!

Let me go, let me fly from this world,
Away from here, away from everyone,
Into the never ending darkness,
Of another world, no more burdens!

Who should or would ever care,
Yes I know, I know the answer too,
No one would, and no one does,
Trapped alone like a bird in a zoo!

Flying alone to my destiny,
For I’ am gone, empty and only a shell,
Forget me, and forget that I existed,
At long last I’ am released from this hell!

My life has faded away before my eyes,
A closed and totally dimmed out gem,
I can’t pretend to belong any longer,
I need to leave, be true to who I really am!

I’m gone; I’ve never been here,
All was an illusion, fake and un-true,
Say your goodbyes to me, and be done,
Because I’m going away to become new!

Emptiness has me in its grips,
I wrestle with my conscience,
But soon enough it gropes at me,
The world is getting its Vengeance!

I feel it closer; I’m nearing the end,
Moving further away from you,
Damn this razor blade edging,
After my lifetime pledging!

Damn you and Damn everyone else,
I’m sick of this place, I’m sick of it all,
I want to be far away from here,
My emotions, up and down like a ball!

Outside here all alone, cold and dark,
Waiting for the moment, to let it go,
Just slice, you’ll see the thin line appear,
I can’t feel the pain, but I see the blood flow!


Twist the knife deeper; I need to feel the pain,
Feel the reality of this world around me,
Slowly falling away, it’s dripping on the ground,
Life is slipping, my eyes are blurry I can hardly see!

The worlds turning black around me,
I feel cold, the worlds blinking on and off,
I’m shaking terribly; I’m plunging down,
I slip to the ground; my body goes limp and soft!






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Re: Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:52:31 PM AEST
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I can relate too well to this, i know what you mean. I hope u feel better. If u ever need someone to talk to, just let me know.


Re: Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by monophobic on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:10:58 PM AEST
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I feel like i have been exactly where you are in this poem and i know it is hell. but i think its cool you seem so passionate about what your saying. hang in there.


Re: Disaster (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:44:50 PM AEST
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everyone thinks life is hell. which is stupid, considering they've never even been through something that horrible

well i don't know if you have been, but this write intrigues me. it makes me a little angry, but then again, i don't know your position.

take care
acy




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