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Array ( [sid] => 62550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Path In Which I Seek [time] => 2004-09-04 17:53:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can feel my heart seeking
I don’t want to feel any pain in this day
If only I could stay
For just a second of time in this world
Where life is just a daze
Only just a few little
Seconds of this death
I want to be happy
To show my smile again
Take these tears
And wipe them away
I cannot cry
Let me be
Leave me to be free
Let me see who I am
Lost once before
Now I’m finding my way
I’ve chosen my path
Now I am to follow it
Wrong turns emerge
But I can find my way
Through this path
I will find the end
The end in which I will be true [comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 19 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

A Path In Which I Seek

Contributed by pyrofungus on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 05:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

I can feel my heart seeking
I don’t want to feel any pain in this day
If only I could stay
For just a second of time in this world
Where life is just a daze
Only just a few little
Seconds of this death
I want to be happy
To show my smile again
Take these tears
And wipe them away
I cannot cry
Let me be
Leave me to be free
Let me see who I am
Lost once before
Now I’m finding my way
I’ve chosen my path
Now I am to follow it
Wrong turns emerge
But I can find my way
Through this path
I will find the end
The end in which I will be true

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-09-04 17:53:37]
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Re: A Path In Which I Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 09:21:37 PM AEST
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well im not one to read inspirational poetry, but i saw it was one of your postings and the title and i assumed it would be an excellent write, and you didnt prove my assumption wrong. the emotional outpour in this kind of takes away the inspiration in it for me. i can see why it would be inspirational, but i dont know i guess i got caught up in the beginning. at least you know that all paths have wrong turns and the like, you have a good head on your shoulders.

Re: A Path In Which I Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:01:18 PM AEST
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Summer I like this poem very much. You have a mind of your own, and that's good!
But let others help you like you should!
If you care to be happy, as you walk along.
Learn to sing a song........with the accompaniment of others if you please, but remember with others the beautiful sound of harmony!
You are so talented..........indeed! I enjoy reading your poems with zest and zeal!
Keep up the good work and take others help.
You'll be happier as you should!
Poetic hugs,
Lovingcritters
ConSue

Re: A Path In Which I Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 06:59:37 PM AEST
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i love this poem... your wording is beautiful*

Re: A Path In Which I Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by lovesucks on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:45:30 PM AEST
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you just continually leave me speachless some things that I have not been able to express you have written so well
Wrong turns emerge
But I can find my way
Through this path
I will find the end
The end in which I will be true

Your awesome so glad you brought your writings to my attention...u do have fans.. haha
theresa

Re: A Path In Which I Seek (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 25th September 2004 @ 08:06:11 PM AEST
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Yor poetry has that lovely style
I love it

cheers!

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