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Array ( [sid] => 62505 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pills to Sleep [time] => 2004-09-04 06:09:15 [hometext] => Think about this one. Corrupted_minds [bodytext] => Passive dreams of hellish black,
Golden shadows lurk in my mind,
I'll lock the door, I wont look back,
Now rapture I will find,
Unblock the suitcase to reveal a knife,
A tiny box with a ribbion tied,
Still remember how I lost my life,
And how for a boy I cried,
How love can ruin what it never owned,
And to take what was never given,
If only I had my heart cloned,
Then maybe you'd be forgiven,
The shades of burden tied my feet,
Lock me in a cage that's cold,
Sow my mouth shut so I never eat,
And like a sex slave I am sold,
My father always raped me,
Let alone died for a boy,
And what you never see is me,
Cos I'm a broken childhood toy,
Young ***** and ***** okay,
Atleast I can admit,
Now nothing like you used to say,
Could hurt me one more bit,
God, your a ********* *******br /> You never answered my prayer,
The thought of you still makes me sick,
The thought that you never care,
I slit my wrists but felt no pain,
So I cleft my throat aswell,
And in the night it starts to rain,
Cos I'm still stuck in this hell,
So I took the pills that were left for safe keep,
Then walked to my bed,
The little pills but my to sleep,
And there I could rest my head. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 36 [informant] => corrupted_minds [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Pills to Sleep

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:09:15 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Passive dreams of hellish black,
Golden shadows lurk in my mind,
I'll lock the door, I wont look back,
Now rapture I will find,
Unblock the suitcase to reveal a knife,
A tiny box with a ribbion tied,
Still remember how I lost my life,
And how for a boy I cried,
How love can ruin what it never owned,
And to take what was never given,
If only I had my heart cloned,
Then maybe you'd be forgiven,
The shades of burden tied my feet,
Lock me in a cage that's cold,
Sow my mouth shut so I never eat,
And like a sex slave I am sold,
My father always raped me,
Let alone died for a boy,
And what you never see is me,
Cos I'm a broken childhood toy,
Young ***** and ***** okay,
Atleast I can admit,
Now nothing like you used to say,
Could hurt me one more bit,
God, your a ********* *******br /> You never answered my prayer,
The thought of you still makes me sick,
The thought that you never care,
I slit my wrists but felt no pain,
So I cleft my throat aswell,
And in the night it starts to rain,
Cos I'm still stuck in this hell,
So I took the pills that were left for safe keep,
Then walked to my bed,
The little pills but my to sleep,
And there I could rest my head.




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Re: Pills to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by cj_ranson on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:27:00 AM AEST
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reel good, as always, twas good



come on msn,

bi


Re: Pills to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 07:49:49 AM AEST
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There's so much expressed here and yet again you have poured out your heart through writing poetry. i'm so sorry about what happened to you, and even more so that you are still living inside this night mare! if you want to talk, my offer is still open!


Re: Pills to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 10:32:14 AM AEST
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It's really a sad commentary that some humans treat other humans as objects to be played with. I see a lot of emotion in this write and you really got it all down well. (Although with that depth of feeling and experiences I'm sure it doesn't feel like you got it all out.)


Re: Pills to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:45:06 AM AEST
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heartbreaking. Had very good flow to it. great write

love always, dizza
xoxoxoxox


Re: Pills to Sleep (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 12:20:11 AM AEST
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WOW that was deep. Great write. keep it up.

HAKIOKUSAKEN




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