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selfish
Contributed by
Haligh
on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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can i steal you?
can i take you away from the world
and hide you?
so that i can be with you whenever i want
and let no one else ever see you ever again
no, that would be selfish
will you come over?
so i can hold you forever
yes, i'll just refuse to let you go
'cause everytime i let you go i get colder
can i at least wear your jacket while your away?
because it smells like you,
so maybe i can pretend that your here
and make myself feel a little bit better?
Copyright ©
Haligh
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2002-11-05 16:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: selfish
(User Rating: 1 ) by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 08:00:54 PM AEST (User
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I have to say, the very first line of this poem brought a smile to my face, because I know exactly how you feel! And yeah, maybe it's a little selfish, but... what's so horrible about being selfish, really? lol
"every time I let you go I get colder" - love that line! :D Awesome poem, I personally love it!
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