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Why me LORD,why me , why me !

Contributed by gina on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



IF you think it's so unjust
how life steals all you've got
you live you die no body cares
you try but fail to move the rub
all alone you're left to bear...
then welcome my friend,join my club!


IF you feel for seconds walking on air
not even a wind,just a cool breeze
will drag you down and kill your dare
that's the point of life:no mercy,no ease
no use to fight back,trust me i was there
with time i gave up,surrendered and ceased


IF you decided to stand up and walk on ice
you won't get far,you'll stay on the shore
lose the idea and don't think twice
you're doing now what i failed to do before


IF you hear my advice,join the Race and obey
it's the wise thing to do,there's no other way
when upset,fed up and feeling really blue
i told you this , you know what to do
just lay in your bed,turn off the light
grasp a black pen and start to write:
"i've been as good as a person can be
then why me Lord, why me, why me !!!?




Copyright © gina ... [ 2002-11-05 13:30:00]
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Re: Why me LORD,why me , why me ! (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:52:18 PM AEST
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Gina very good write,I really liked this a lot!Cristina


Re: Why me LORD,why me , why me ! (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:07:14 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one
Very creative
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Why me LORD,why me , why me ! (User Rating: 1 )
by Opium on Wednesday, 6th November 2002 @ 05:20:20 AM AEST
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I wish I knew why Gina, but all I can say is mmmmmmmmmmm, well, great write! keep 'em coming! :P


Re: Why me LORD,why me , why me ! (User Rating: 1 )
by kimbo on Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:29:19 AM AEST
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a great piece how many of us have felt this but failed to put it into words. i especially liked the second verse this really grabbed me.
well written well done and keep up the good work




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