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wouldn't it be lovely to slip into that spa
the jets would massage your body
and I could take off my bra

If I flicked off my shoes
wouldn't it be lovely to go for a swim
the gentle water can stroke against my body
while I lay back and only think of him

let's not cook dinner
wouldn't it be lovely to have a meal with a mate
we chat, relax unwind from this busy day
no work tomorrow so it's definate we're staying up late

stripping right off to my undies
wouldn't it be sweet to have a total massage
loosen your muscles and dose off for an hour
you never know, it won't ever show your true age

lift the spiderwebs from your mind
wouldn't it be peaceful if the rubbish was left behind
having a crystal clear concience
is the best thing you'll find!

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Wouldn't It Be Lovely To Massage Those Aches Away

Contributed by inoc on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:20:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I ache all over
wouldn't it be lovely to slip into that spa
the jets would massage your body
and I could take off my bra

If I flicked off my shoes
wouldn't it be lovely to go for a swim
the gentle water can stroke against my body
while I lay back and only think of him

let's not cook dinner
wouldn't it be lovely to have a meal with a mate
we chat, relax unwind from this busy day
no work tomorrow so it's definate we're staying up late

stripping right off to my undies
wouldn't it be sweet to have a total massage
loosen your muscles and dose off for an hour
you never know, it won't ever show your true age

lift the spiderwebs from your mind
wouldn't it be peaceful if the rubbish was left behind
having a crystal clear concience
is the best thing you'll find!

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2004-09-03 09:20:44]
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Re: Wouldn't It Be Lovely To Massage Those Aches Away (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 10:15:02 AM AEST
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Oh inoc this is marvelous, I know you love God's word......try this scripture on for size! Psalms 55:22.......throw you burden upon him....I do that every minute of the day.......best massage you could ever hope to have........talk about "cobwebs" I give them all to him........and never take them back.....wonderful way of massaging yourself all over........try it you'll like it!
I loved this poem.
Poetic hugs
consue

Re: Wouldn't It Be Lovely To Massage Those Aches Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 04:48:18 AM AEST
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A spa, dinner out, a late night, and an all over massage ... ? OMG darlin where do I sign up ? A great write. Who can't relate to such a dream date ?

Nazmythian ~

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