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Array ( [sid] => 62392 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Free Fall Highway [time] => 2004-09-03 08:43:34 [hometext] => Just a direct feed from white knight sindrome, an older poem but one I like [bodytext] => Let me take you on a journey
way out side the city
outside the prison of your hell
take my hand
and each step.....
is a step further out of your mind
come with me
to the forest of serenity
without the hatred of the city
away from that cold stone
the shadows will receed
in the sunlight of the forest
the children of your hand
will be freed to joy
and not persecuited
reviled or hated
free to make their journey
in light of day
or beauty of night
you can breath the cool air of the forest
not the pollution of your prison
the prison called society
you will be free free
free to be you
to be with me
to rest your weary eyes
rest your weary mind
so take my hand in yours
you need no longer fight
for I will protect you within my embrace
but you must make the first step
a leap of faith and believe
for I will catch you
and take you forever out of this place [comments] => 3 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Jester [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Free Fall Highway

Contributed by Jester on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:43:34 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Let me take you on a journey
way out side the city
outside the prison of your hell
take my hand
and each step.....
is a step further out of your mind
come with me
to the forest of serenity
without the hatred of the city
away from that cold stone
the shadows will receed
in the sunlight of the forest
the children of your hand
will be freed to joy
and not persecuited
reviled or hated
free to make their journey
in light of day
or beauty of night
you can breath the cool air of the forest
not the pollution of your prison
the prison called society
you will be free free
free to be you
to be with me
to rest your weary eyes
rest your weary mind
so take my hand in yours
you need no longer fight
for I will protect you within my embrace
but you must make the first step
a leap of faith and believe
for I will catch you
and take you forever out of this place

Copyright © Jester ... [ 2004-09-03 08:43:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Free Fall Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:59:48 AM AEST
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This left me with a peaceful feeling. I hate the city.

Well done my friend
Larry

Re: Free Fall Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by RavenShadows on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 11:12:43 AM AEST
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I really like this one...very good.

Re: Free Fall Highway (User Rating: 1 )
by Starlilly on Monday, 25th October 2004 @ 02:32:42 PM AEST
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Very well done!!!!
Love the peacefulness I felt ~

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