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Array ( [sid] => 62382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Own World [time] => 2004-09-03 05:38:08 [hometext] => comments would be appreciated!!! [bodytext] => I am lost, dont want to be found,
Im in my own world, dont want u around,
In my own world, i am safe here,
nothing around me, i dont fear,
I have closed up my heart,
noone can tear it apart,
Ill never get hurt again,
this pain will finally end,
Im in my own world, and thats where ill stay,
Ill stay lost, and i dont want to find the way,
Ill stay in my own world just another day [comments] => 5 [counter] => 452 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Jenn2004 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

My Own World

Contributed by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:38:08 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am lost, dont want to be found,
Im in my own world, dont want u around,
In my own world, i am safe here,
nothing around me, i dont fear,
I have closed up my heart,
noone can tear it apart,
Ill never get hurt again,
this pain will finally end,
Im in my own world, and thats where ill stay,
Ill stay lost, and i dont want to find the way,
Ill stay in my own world just another day

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Re: My Own World (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 05:48:29 AM AEST
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YOUR POEM IS NICE TO READ
SHORT AND TO THE POINT
well done

cheeers!

Re: My Own World (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:08:06 AM AEST
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Jenn I know what it is like to feel lost, to wish to hide from the pain, to be blind to the next step.
I wish I was able to give you some emotions to drive away your shadows, something that seems impossible for me to do being an ocean of forbidden blue, but I'll send then in this message instead, hopefully enough to surfice.
You are a very talented writter, and you know how to open ones eyes to the what others are going through, Your poems are like a tapestry being painted alittle at a time as you write some more.
I wish you all the best and hope you have a beautiful future.

Take Care always

Kindragon

Re: My Own World (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:25:23 AM AEST
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Everyone knows what its like to be lost, we;ve all been lost at some time or another, and this poem brings that feeling out to perfection
Keep up the good work!

Re: My Own World (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:56:53 AM AEST
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Jen a wonderful poem may you find your way to open up to love again. Be open and receptive to love when it comes and never settle for second best.

A wonderful poem

Love Sweetangelukxxxx

Re: My Own World (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:50:32 AM AEST
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i can certainly relate to this one but I havn't given up tho.
Hang tuff and keep up the awesome writing.
luv, huggs,
emy

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