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Array ( [sid] => 62375 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm sorry [time] => 2004-09-03 03:14:26 [hometext] => I had to be quick writing this one so it needs some editting, but this one means alot to me. So please read. Corrupted+minds [bodytext] => I do my best,
I try to try,
But every turn,
Just makes me cry,
All I do is wrong,
It's never right,
When i start to care,
'we start to fight,
I love you,
But I've kept it inside,
Can't you see it now,
All the times I've cried,
I tore my own heart out,
and placed it in a box,
tied it with a ribbion,
and saw it as no loss,
But you never opened it,
You needent even see,
The lonely heart in the box,
was from ellucide old me,
Can't make things right again,
Couldn't even in the start,
Now I say goodbye,
My ships about to part,
I want to say I'm sorry,
For all that I've done,
I'll pay it back,
But now I'll run,
Every drop of blood from my body,
Will drip from my skin,
And Don't even burry my body,
Just chuck it in the bin,
That's all I'm worth,
I've done nothing for you,
I've tried and failed,
To be a friend that's true,
I be myself,
But myself is wrong,
Can't make you happy now,
But it wont be long,
Not long till it's over,
Not long till it's said,
Not long till you notice,
My hearts already dead,


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I'm sorry

Contributed by corrupted_minds on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:14:26 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I do my best,
I try to try,
But every turn,
Just makes me cry,
All I do is wrong,
It's never right,
When i start to care,
'we start to fight,
I love you,
But I've kept it inside,
Can't you see it now,
All the times I've cried,
I tore my own heart out,
and placed it in a box,
tied it with a ribbion,
and saw it as no loss,
But you never opened it,
You needent even see,
The lonely heart in the box,
was from ellucide old me,
Can't make things right again,
Couldn't even in the start,
Now I say goodbye,
My ships about to part,
I want to say I'm sorry,
For all that I've done,
I'll pay it back,
But now I'll run,
Every drop of blood from my body,
Will drip from my skin,
And Don't even burry my body,
Just chuck it in the bin,
That's all I'm worth,
I've done nothing for you,
I've tried and failed,
To be a friend that's true,
I be myself,
But myself is wrong,
Can't make you happy now,
But it wont be long,
Not long till it's over,
Not long till it's said,
Not long till you notice,
My hearts already dead,






Copyright © corrupted_minds ... [ 2004-09-03 03:14:26]
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Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Chrissylee on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:22:26 AM AEST
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nice write and kind of jolted me a bit cause i kinda get the feeling my bf has done the same thing


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by iluvpencils on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:23:29 AM AEST
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Wow. I love this poem. You're obviously talented. It was filled with emotion and I felt every word. I'm very sorry for your pain though. I can understand how you feel but try not to beat yourself up to badly about whatever you feel you've done. =) *hugs*


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by artostuff on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 03:40:14 AM AEST
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I like this, its a emotional read. Very good imagery. Thank you.


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:25:14 AM AEST
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beautiful


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:11:36 AM AEST
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you put this poem together wonderfully

I hope your heart starts beating again!
[because you are such a great poet]

keep writing
cheers!


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Dizza_13 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 04:21:37 PM AEST
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very sad and emotional. Very well writin. I hope that
some one will find your heart

love always, dizza
xoxoxox


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Hakiokusaken on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 09:48:18 PM AEST
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That was absolutely Great, I enjoyed reading it, although it is very sad. beautiful write. Hang in there. Excellent Write.

HAKIOKUSAKEN


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 01:23:56 AM AEST
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good work loz


Re: I'm sorry (User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 02:12:19 PM AEST
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you have some heavy words and you are pretty deep great job




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