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Array ( [sid] => 62363 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Alone [time] => 2004-09-02 23:43:22 [hometext] => Wrote this a long time ago. Entered it in a poetry contest, folks seemed to like it, hope you do too. [bodytext] => I, I alone have felt the deepest desperation I have ever known.
Walked across fields of death. Felt the coldest black air whisper on my cheeks.
Had the silence scream so loud,
I couldn't hear myself speak.
Bones around me tripping me up.
Bitter reminders of memories past.
I, I have stared into the eyes of evil,
Passed many mirrors along the way.
Talked to the trees, Sreamed my name in the wind.
Crawled through twisted thorns of pain. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 65 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

I Alone

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:43:22 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I, I alone have felt the deepest desperation I have ever known.
Walked across fields of death. Felt the coldest black air whisper on my cheeks.
Had the silence scream so loud,
I couldn't hear myself speak.
Bones around me tripping me up.
Bitter reminders of memories past.
I, I have stared into the eyes of evil,
Passed many mirrors along the way.
Talked to the trees, Sreamed my name in the wind.
Crawled through twisted thorns of pain.

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Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:55:05 PM AEST
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Has a very poignant and lonely feel. Nice write.

Rita

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:58:59 AM AEST
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Good write i feel like that alot.

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 12:59:30 AM AEST
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Good write i feel like that alot.

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 01:32:55 AM AEST
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brilliant, u have great talent

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:48:41 AM AEST
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like the last line expecially,,,,
-crawled through twisted thorns of pain-

a unique poem
thanks for sharing

cheers!

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by AspenGlow on Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 08:34:29 AM AEST
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This is a beautiful poem, and have been there many a dark and dreary eve.

Thank you for sharing, this is a #1.

Chris

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 09:43:59 PM AEST
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U do have a great talent... don't ever lose it... or let it slip...
This is brilliantly written... it has that raw edgy feel to it... that's great... very lonely... Keep writing...
~Donna~

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by OzChick on Saturday, 11th February 2006 @ 10:44:42 PM AEST
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Powerful write Laura. I have felt this way at times.

~Jenny~

Re: I Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 05:23:07 AM AEST
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Aw, sad, Laurabean. :-( It's very well written though.

I like the way you did that "hesitation" thing there...you know...the "I, I alone....I, I have stared." Kinda gave it a musical feel, like a song with a rhythm and a beat.

Nice touch.

Thanks,

Tim
:-)

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