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Array ( [sid] => 62337 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Too Early To Leave [time] => 2004-09-02 19:31:14 [hometext] => Written while I was in the ER waiting room b/c my dad was in the back..... To my Dad [bodytext] => My mind is hollow
My breath I swallow
Holding in the pain

You can't leave me now, I'm too weak
Your love and hate, I seek
I can't be without you

Dad, please, stick in there
If you die, I swear
I'll go insane

Stay here for me
Stay here for us, you need to see
How much we need you

Stay strong through it all
Be strong, don't fall
I need you more than you'll ever know
But everything I feel, I cannot show [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 65 [informant] => imlostbutloved69 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
Too Early To Leave

Contributed by imlostbutloved69 on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:31:14 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



My mind is hollow
My breath I swallow
Holding in the pain

You can't leave me now, I'm too weak
Your love and hate, I seek
I can't be without you

Dad, please, stick in there
If you die, I swear
I'll go insane

Stay here for me
Stay here for us, you need to see
How much we need you

Stay strong through it all
Be strong, don't fall
I need you more than you'll ever know
But everything I feel, I cannot show




Copyright © imlostbutloved69 ... [ 2004-09-02 19:31:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Too Early To Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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Lovely and touching write.... Hope all is well with your dad..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Too Early To Leave (User Rating: 1 )
by TwEeK on Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:35:34 PM AEST
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oh dear! i hope your father is alright!
good poem!
godspeed to him for a quick recovery.
keep on writin'

Tweek




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