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Too Early To Leave
Contributed by
imlostbutloved69
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Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 07:31:14 PM in AEST
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My mind is hollow
My breath I swallow
Holding in the pain
You can't leave me now, I'm too weak
Your love and hate, I seek
I can't be without you
Dad, please, stick in there
If you die, I swear
I'll go insane
Stay here for me
Stay here for us, you need to see
How much we need you
Stay strong through it all
Be strong, don't fall
I need you more than you'll ever know
But everything I feel, I cannot show
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imlostbutloved69
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2004-09-02 19:31:14]
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Re: Too Early To Leave
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 10:09:03 PM AEST
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Lovely and touching write.... Hope all is well with your dad..
Hugs
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Re: Too Early To Leave
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by TwEeK on
Sunday, 12th September 2004 @ 01:35:34 PM AEST
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oh dear! i hope your father is alright!
good poem!
godspeed to him for a quick recovery.
keep on writin'
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